This was a riveting chapter! I wish the Order had given Harry even the barest of instructions, but I understand why they didn’t. I wonder how Harry and Snape’s relationship is going to change in the chapters ahead. Thanks for having Sirius gift Grimmauld to the right person!
I've read this fic several times and I only just noticed that you left Harry's Divination results out of his OWL report. Was that purposeful?
Author's Response: Thanks for spotting this. I've added the Divination results. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for spotting this. I've added the Divination results. :)
"You need to think long and hard about how many more lives you’re willing to sacrifice to this hatred.”
HARSH, Remy. Very harsh. But necessary nonetheless XD
I like the description of Weasley's Wizard Wheezes - very nice and colourful. I have much love for the tongue, too XD
| Title: Chapter 1: Summer
| 02 Mar 2007 5:39 am
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| Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous)
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Oooh, I'm very excited to see this posted here. I read it originally at the Sugar Quill. Great work.
And so the story starts off with a bang. Harry's visions are chilling, and his reactions so well described. Each canon character who makes an appearance just seems so much like themselves. I must admit to loving the idea of cat!McGonagall scratching LV's face along with Mr. Tibbles.
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