That was an absolutely delicious chapter! Thank you so much for that.
| Title: Chapter 2: School Starts
| 27 Oct 2021 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter thank you,
OH MAH GAWD SNAPEY YOU ARE A BASTARD XD But, you know, in a nice, cuddly sort of way XD
I want to commend you on the fact that your chapters are like awesomely long and whatever. Plus all of your characters, not just Harry and Snape (and possibly Dumbledore) are really IC. I luff it when everyone looks and sounds like they're supposed to XD
The escalation of the animosity between Snape and Harry in this chapter is chillingly detailed. The aftermath of the potion's class was terrible and will be a lot for Harry to get over. The duel with Snape clearly shows just how much these two despise each other at this point, and was one of my more memorable scenes in fanfiction at the time I first read it. I remember remembering the scene and then trying to remember what story I had read it in and looking for it again. This was back when you were originally posting chapter-by-chapter on Sugarquill.
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