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Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate 03 Apr 2023 1:48 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is brilliantly written. I love Snape’s keen insights and the way that you’ve described Harry’s struggles.
Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate 28 Oct 2021 11:20 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate 27 Oct 2021 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate 11 Sep 2007 6:59 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Snapey Snapey Snapey ... you are not my favourite character for nothing XD

    I can completely relate with how Harry is feeling with the whole Ron/Hermione thing, but I'm happy that Snape is like SUCK IT UP, BIATCH. Plus nice Snape/Harry interaction XD I always wanted the whole Snape/Harry luff thing to happen, but I think that your way is also just as good - not exactly friends, I think, but probably more like family or whatever, with such a deep connection and the fact that (later on) they are going to start to depend on each other.

    I luff XD
Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate 06 Mar 2007 8:32 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Ack! Sorry, I guess I couldn't use the little carets I did offset the quote. Here is the text I quoted in the previous review:

    “Understand what, Potter?” Snape asked matching Harry’s tone. “Loneliness? Or the weight of a burden that can’t be shared?”

    Harry stood perfectly still, his anger giving way to a strange sort of fear. Snape knew what he was feeling. More than that, he understood. Harry couldn’t have said why exactly, but he found that horribly disturbing.

Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate 06 Mar 2007 8:28 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]


    This is one of my favorite exchanges in the whole story.

    It is interesting to me reading this again to see how much this chapter sets up what you are doing in the sequel with Snape's mind--the greyness and loneliness of his memories.

    I love Ron and Hermione in this chapter and how you use their relationship to illustrate Harry's aloneness with his visions and prophecy.

    It's also neat how little of your vision of Snape was shafted by HBP.

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