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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Enemy Within
I can completely relate with how Harry is feeling with the whole Ron/Hermione thing, but I'm happy that Snape is like SUCK IT UP, BIATCH. Plus nice Snape/Harry interaction XD I always wanted the whole Snape/Harry luff thing to happen, but I think that your way is also just as good - not exactly friends, I think, but probably more like family or whatever, with such a deep connection and the fact that (later on) they are going to start to depend on each other. I luff XD
“Understand what, Potter?” Snape asked matching Harry’s tone. “Loneliness? Or the weight of a burden that can’t be shared?” Harry stood perfectly still, his anger giving way to a strange sort of fear. Snape knew what he was feeling. More than that, he understood. Harry couldn’t have said why exactly, but he found that horribly disturbing.
This is one of my favorite exchanges in the whole story. It is interesting to me reading this again to see how much this chapter sets up what you are doing in the sequel with Snape's mind--the greyness and loneliness of his memories. I love Ron and Hermione in this chapter and how you use their relationship to illustrate Harry's aloneness with his visions and prophecy. It's also neat how little of your vision of Snape was shafted by HBP. |
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