This was a riveting chapter! I wish the Order had given Harry even the barest of instructions, but I understand why they didn’t. I wonder how Harry and Snape’s relationship is going to change in the chapters ahead. Thanks for having Sirius gift Grimmauld to the right person!
Great start to your story. I really like this McGonagall of steel!
Fabulously hilarious scene with Ryan! I never guessed his secret, so the revelation was quite a trip! Really glad that Harry gets to spend time with Remus, and A SEQUEL!!! -- am trying to imagine how many different monkey wrenches Snape can throw into a single summer! Thank you so much for such a terrific story. I'm not sure how I missed this all those years ago, but I'm so glad to have finally read it through, in just two days, no less. Talk about a page turner! Way to GO! 😺
POWERFUL!!! Not a false note throughout! I kept bracing myself for the backstory to go away, but it never did -- it kept building and building into an incredibly solid structure, and I'm absolutely delighted with the ending between Harry and Snape! Now, on to the finale...
| Title: Chapter 5: Christmas at the Weasleys's
| 21 Jun 2022 8:13 pm
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You had me laughing out loud as the letters literally flew back and forth between Harry and Snape! And then the competition between Mercury and Hedwig to be the first to deliver to Snape!!! Absolutely love this chapter! And seriously, given that the story this far has been pretty tense, it was great to get an opportunity to have some light-hearted fun before the grind begins again. 😁
| Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate
| 28 Oct 2021 11:20 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate
| 27 Oct 2021 8:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 3: Occlumency and Legilimency
| 27 Oct 2021 8:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very dramatic chapter
| Title: Chapter 2: School Starts
| 27 Oct 2021 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter thank you,
| Title: Prologue
| 27 Oct 2021 4:16 pm
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Thank you a good start to the story
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