I greatly enjoyed this story!!! Looking forward to reading the sequel
This story is incredible!! One of the best Snape-teaching-Harry fics I've ever read, and by FAR the coolest portrayal of Harry learning occlumency and legilimancy. And I love your OC, Ryan! I partially figured out his game when he convinced Harry in such a "subtle" (I'm sure he was capable of more subtlety, but Harry isn't!) way to write to the ministry. I was so happy to figure that much out 'cause you'd kept me deliciously in the dark until then. Awesome! On to the sequel!! I so hope you finished it...I haven't looked yet. :)
Wonderful & convincing pace and characterisation. If I had to quibble, I'd question how easily the conflicts are resolved and long-term resentments are put aside, but hey, I suppose that's what fanfic is for. Always happy to see people stand up for Snape!
Thank you for writing :)
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| 11 Sep 2014 10:28 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 19: The End
| 04 Apr 2014 9:57 am
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Enjoyed this story a great deal. Thank you!
I've lost track of the number of times I'm read and enjoyed this story and its sequel. Likewise, I've lost track of how many times I've recommended these stories to HP lovers being "as good as two more Harry Potter books!" No kidding, I always start with your works when introducing new readers to HP fanfiction. Anyway, my favorite line rediscovered in this chapter is "I personally have no experience at killing anyone with kindness." Nope! No one would disagree with Severus on that one! Thank you once again for having written this story and its sequel. I will always give you "10" whenever I review any chapter--you deserve to have these rediscovered over and over again.
Story was very good, I hoped we would see Harry defeating Vold, well maybe in your next story.
This was an amazing story. While reading this, I think you took me through every emotion known to man. It was very well written and you did an amazing job.
This was AMAZING! I'm absolutely blown away. The plot, the details, the characterization...I'm not sure I have the words to tell you how much I enjoyed this. Brilliant story and I can't wait to read the sequel!
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