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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Enemy Within
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I hope you like the sequel as well. Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I hope you like the sequel as well.
Author's Response: Thanks for spotting this. I've added the Divination results. :) Author's Response: Thanks for spotting this. I've added the Divination results. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Ryan was a wonderful surprise for me. I knew his basic bio from the beginning, of course, but as I went along and really got to know him, he turned out to be a terrific character and was so much fun to write.
I repeat, it's your best. Author's Response: Thank you. This is one of my favorite chapters and I'm delighted that it moved you so.
Also, I loved Harry's memory and I loved Snapey's reaction. Hopefully it means that Snape was a friend of Lily's (since this was written pre-DH). I luff XD
Also, I'd like to immediately point the finger at Ryan for being a DE, but then again you already have one main(ish) character in play who is an obvious DE so I don't really see the point in having two main DE/spy people besides Severus. Plus the obvious choice is to put your DE spy in the ministry, rather than right next to the most powerful wizard of the 20th century. Afterall, the ministry controls Britain - Dumbledore just largely influences XD |
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