Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 9: The Dark Mark 11 Sep 2007 9:26 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG DUMBLEDORE YOU ROCK.

    Plus I'm very glad that Harry and Snapey had a ... er, "reconciliation". I'm not quite sure what you call a reconciliation between two people who can't really stand each other. Ah well XD

    But Mr. Weasley saying all that stuff ... hopefully he doesn't get into trouble X(
Title: Chapter 8: Flying 11 Sep 2007 8:27 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! Who is using polyjuice to impersonate Crabbe?!?! Is Goyle an imposter too? Where is Lucius Malfoy???

    Lol I bet he's the one infiltrating Hogwarts.

    Also, Harry, you are a bit of a coward but no matter, I still love you XD
Title: Chapter 7: Potions 11 Sep 2007 8:11 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    “Maybe they plan to impersonate you and Harry,” Hermione said with a remarkably straight face."

    LOL. Hermione you pwn everyone XD

    Plus the whole I-can't-help-you-if-you-don't-trust-me thing is a nice touch. Harry and Snape and like everyone else are so believable! I heart XD
Title: Chapter 6: Defense Against the Dark Arts 11 Sep 2007 7:50 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay XD Occlumency and Legilimency are awesome XD

    Plus Snapey really is a bastard. And Ryan ... I don't really know what to make of him. Hopefully he'll say something outside of the classroom and his aforementioned feud with Snape, and I can start figuring him out XD
Title: Chapter 5: Christmas at the Weasleys's 11 Sep 2007 7:24 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, I love epistolaries! You know, even if you only see two letters and the rest are just referred to. It still rocks XD

    Plus, I get the feeling that Minerva is being amazingly interfering, what with telling Snapey that Harry expects a reply back. NAUGHTY NAUGHTY MINNIE. IT'S NOT NICE TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF SNAPEY IN AN AREA HE'S SO OBVIOUSLY NOT ACCUSTOMED TO. No no no XD
Title: Chapter 19: The End 11 Sep 2007 7:11 am
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dear Theowyn,

    This story was bloody brilliant if I say so myself! I truly mean that, this is probubly the best fan-fiction I have read. You had such great ideas, and excellent plots and things with inner meanings that lead up to others, it was so well thought out that J.K. Rowling would be pleased. And if she wasn't 2BAD4HER! You did an excellent job with keeping everyone in character, and at first I totally despised you're Ryan character, but after reading the last chapter, I found him quit witty and actully find it all rather amusing. Yep, alot of humor in this story, which I love, but there was also a lot of emotions and seriousness that ballanced it out well. I loved, and still will continue to love this story, so without further adue, I'm going to read the sequel Harry Potter and the Chained Souls!

    Much love,

    Beth
Title: Chapter 4: Love and Hate 11 Sep 2007 6:59 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Snapey Snapey Snapey ... you are not my favourite character for nothing XD

    I can completely relate with how Harry is feeling with the whole Ron/Hermione thing, but I'm happy that Snape is like SUCK IT UP, BIATCH. Plus nice Snape/Harry interaction XD I always wanted the whole Snape/Harry luff thing to happen, but I think that your way is also just as good - not exactly friends, I think, but probably more like family or whatever, with such a deep connection and the fact that (later on) they are going to start to depend on each other.

    I luff XD
Title: Chapter 15: Consequences 11 Sep 2007 3:30 am
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Crookshanks rocks! I love that little spit-fire of fluff, he's awsome! If only he had eaten Pettigrew, alas. *sighs deeply* Two things I found funny were 'Owl Invasion' and Ron's comment:
    “Isn’t it obvious? He’s trying to bury us in owl droppings,” Ron said.

    I love Harry, Snape, Neville, and Ron

    Hermione and Crookshanks rule!

    I hate Voldemort, Ryan, and Malfoy(all of them)

    I am pissed at all those who like ^ the above and show no concern for Snape.
Title: Chapter 11: Harry's Worst Memory 10 Sep 2007 10:58 pm
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have YET to meet a decent guy named Ryan. In fact, every time that name comes up my sister gets real pissed because ther was a guy in her class with that name that was obnixious. Then there was that Ryan at high school, who was very anoying. Alas, there shall never be a pleasant Ryan. LOL, O.K., thus story is VERY good, it is excellent, but I was upset by some of the memories and that you had Mrs. Weasley die. I almost cried. My eyed DID water though. When I finnish reading this story Harry Potter and the Enemy Within, I plan to read the sequel. GREAT JOB & keep it up Theowyn!
Title: Chapter 3: Occlumency and Legilimency 10 Sep 2007 2:28 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    “Had you been expecting to?” Dumbledore asked mildly."

    Dumbledore owns every scene he's in. He's sort of like Johnny Depp in Pirates of the Caribbean - there would be no Harry Potter without Albus Dumbledore XD

    I'll start on reviewing the rest of the chapters tomorrow, because I am really tired xD

    This remains one of my favourite stories C:

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