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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Enemy Within
Plus I'm very glad that Harry and Snapey had a ... er, "reconciliation". I'm not quite sure what you call a reconciliation between two people who can't really stand each other. Ah well XD But Mr. Weasley saying all that stuff ... hopefully he doesn't get into trouble X(
Lol I bet he's the one infiltrating Hogwarts. Also, Harry, you are a bit of a coward but no matter, I still love you XD
LOL. Hermione you pwn everyone XD Plus the whole I-can't-help-you-if-you-don't-trust-me thing is a nice touch. Harry and Snape and like everyone else are so believable! I heart XD
Plus Snapey really is a bastard. And Ryan ... I don't really know what to make of him. Hopefully he'll say something outside of the classroom and his aforementioned feud with Snape, and I can start figuring him out XD
Plus, I get the feeling that Minerva is being amazingly interfering, what with telling Snapey that Harry expects a reply back. NAUGHTY NAUGHTY MINNIE. IT'S NOT NICE TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF SNAPEY IN AN AREA HE'S SO OBVIOUSLY NOT ACCUSTOMED TO. No no no XD
This story was bloody brilliant if I say so myself! I truly mean that, this is probubly the best fan-fiction I have read. You had such great ideas, and excellent plots and things with inner meanings that lead up to others, it was so well thought out that J.K. Rowling would be pleased. And if she wasn't 2BAD4HER! You did an excellent job with keeping everyone in character, and at first I totally despised you're Ryan character, but after reading the last chapter, I found him quit witty and actully find it all rather amusing. Yep, alot of humor in this story, which I love, but there was also a lot of emotions and seriousness that ballanced it out well. I loved, and still will continue to love this story, so without further adue, I'm going to read the sequel Harry Potter and the Chained Souls! Much love, Beth
I can completely relate with how Harry is feeling with the whole Ron/Hermione thing, but I'm happy that Snape is like SUCK IT UP, BIATCH. Plus nice Snape/Harry interaction XD I always wanted the whole Snape/Harry luff thing to happen, but I think that your way is also just as good - not exactly friends, I think, but probably more like family or whatever, with such a deep connection and the fact that (later on) they are going to start to depend on each other. I luff XD
“Isn’t it obvious? He’s trying to bury us in owl droppings,” Ron said. I love Harry, Snape, Neville, and Ron Hermione and Crookshanks rule! I hate Voldemort, Ryan, and Malfoy(all of them) I am pissed at all those who like ^ the above and show no concern for Snape.
Dumbledore owns every scene he's in. He's sort of like Johnny Depp in Pirates of the Caribbean - there would be no Harry Potter without Albus Dumbledore XD I'll start on reviewing the rest of the chapters tomorrow, because I am really tired xD This remains one of my favourite stories C: |
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