nice! please continue, I like it
| Title: Flight
| 10 Mar 2007 4:51 pm
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| Reviewer: LindseySnape (Anonymous)
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Great first chapter, this has the makings to be an awesome story. I love the way Severus is so helpful, but oh so still himself. Keep up the great work and update soon.
Fantastic. Poor Harry. I liked the clock as the introduction to Harry, and I liked that Harry was sitting there, watching the Death Eater. That shows that he's capable. I also loved that he was hurt, I love h/c! Poor kid though, he had a lot of injuries.
Vernon and Co. arriving seemed to happen a little too neatly, and when Harry was looking at the "Wizard" I got a little lost and kept thinking that he was looking at Snape, or that Snape was looking at Harry with that description. it was a little confusing. The nurse fighting with Snape was hilarious. I love that Harry's running on his own. I can't wait to see Snape run after him!
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