Good story so far. In the first chapter, Vernon backhanded Harry and said something like "i've been wanting to do this forever" but yet in this chapter, Snape sees Harry's memories of Vernon smacking him around. That little tidbit did not seem to line up properly. Great story so far though!
| Title: Seeking Truth
| 11 Apr 2007 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Ebbtide Cheque (Anonymous)
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Wow! That chapter was perfect in so many ways...I just had my S.S. and H.P. fix for the week. Great stuph! ;)
| Title: Snared
| 28 Mar 2007 3:38 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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Well, another great chapter.. I enjoyed reading it and can't wait for the next update!!!
| Title: Disclosure
| 24 Mar 2007 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: fornadan (Anonymous)
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Hi!
I started reading your story once again and because it's still unfinished here I had to go to ff.net to finish it. I love it! You have everything right. Severus is his snarky self. Harry is strong and stubborn. Horses. A fine combination of exitement and warmht. Please do write more! Now I must hurry and take our shetland pony in for night and feed her.(here in Finland it is nine p.m. in case you can see the time I sent this review)Thank you!
| Title: Disclosure
| 23 Mar 2007 6:22 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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Yay!!! An update! I can't wait for the next chapter...
"put the fear of Snape into him" Hahaha! Love it.
Awesome, awesome chapter. I love this stuff.
"crutiartis curse" is it supposed to be spelled that way? Isn't it the Cruciatus?
| Title: Paradise Lost
| 20 Mar 2007 7:08 am
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| Reviewer: Meallan (Anonymous)
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I really like the story so far. It has a lot of potential. I really hope you continue it. It looks as though it has quite a bit of room to grow. Anyway, you're doing great.
Yay the motorbike! I loved the fact that it was all shiny. Wonderful touch and very visual.
I'm glad that Harry's friends still count on him, even though they were feeling down at first.
nice! please continue, I like it
| Title: Flight
| 10 Mar 2007 4:51 pm
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| Reviewer: LindseySnape (Anonymous)
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Great first chapter, this has the makings to be an awesome story. I love the way Severus is so helpful, but oh so still himself. Keep up the great work and update soon.
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