| Title: Chapter 3
| 02 Apr 2020 4:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very manipulative Albus but Severus is better!
Little guy just has a way of worming into your heart, doesn't he? ^^
| Title: Chapter 3
| 13 Apr 2007 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Shanna (Anonymous)
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Pretty good so far. As for other stories similiar theres one on fanfiction dot net. He's not a YOUNG child, but a child none the less, and develoups cancer...
It's called Recnac Transfaerso and it's by Celebony...also a good read.
Your use of language is beautiful - the scenes and the conversations just *flow.* I could cry for little Harry, but your descriptions are intense without being graphic. Wonderful stuff.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 15 Mar 2007 4:58 am
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| Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous)
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This is sadly sweet. I hope they find a way to make Harry better.
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