| Title: Chapter 4
| 17 Mar 2007 2:48 am
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| Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous)
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I'm glad you realize all those things that are "wrong" with your story. Other than that, and yes, I will keep reading, I am enjoying it.
Your use of language is beautiful - the scenes and the conversations just *flow.* I could cry for little Harry, but your descriptions are intense without being graphic. Wonderful stuff.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 15 Mar 2007 4:58 am
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| Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous)
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This is sadly sweet. I hope they find a way to make Harry better.
Interesting setup. I'll be watching for more of this one...
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Mar 2007 5:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Spalding19 (Anonymous)
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Great! Please update soon, I really like the different approach, with Harry having cancer. And to the other reviewer who said that medicare is free in the UK, it is in Canada too but some things need to be paid for, and unless there is insurance cancer is a very expensive disease to treat. Trust me, I know. Keep up the good work!!
A very promising start.. I'm looking forward to the rest.
However,just a small thing, but here in the UK, we don't pay for medical care it's free to all.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Mar 2007 8:49 am
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| Reviewer: spuddy (Anonymous)
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Awsome start to what i hope will become a great story. poor harry being left by his only family when he neded them most. keep up the good work!
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