| Title: Harry
| 11 Jul 2005 11:31 pm
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| Reviewer: kw (Anonymous)
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i am enjoying your story i cant wait for the then part
HOLY COW! This story has more twists than a roller coaster! I don't know where you come up with it!!
Please update soon! I want to know what Harry's reaction is when everything comes out about Tonks!! ;)
| Title: Harry
| 14 Jun 2005 7:38 am
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| Reviewer: Bri (Anonymous)
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Hey I have really been enjoying this fanfic. I hope that you update really soon I think you shoujuld most definatley keep this going it is awesome!
| Title: Harry
| 04 Jun 2005 6:50 am
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| Reviewer: Footmonster (Anonymous)
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I love this story! It is perhaps my favorite of all the ones that I have read--and I have read many, many, MANY. I see that you have been criticized for letting the animosity between Snape and Harry last a while, but I like what you have done; Harry and Snape would not immediately love each other, and I think that you have done an excellent--if not the best that I have seen--job in writing the story as you have with the continued, strained relationship. I shall now go to ff.net to read the next two chapters. You rock! :D Smiles and teacakes to thee!
| Title: Harry
| 31 May 2005 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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| Title: Harry
| 31 May 2005 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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WOW! This is a really great fic! However, I would like to explain why I reated it at a five. See even though I like it that you're doing it really originally by not making Harry and Snape get along right away I feel that you have prolonged it unnessisarily.
I think that perhaps you need to start easing into the Harry/Sanpe Father/Son relationship to simply give it a more interesting spin.
this was my fave. chapter so far because it really showed emotion really well. I espeshialy liked that you had Remus kinda blameing Harry but then trying to deny the feelings even from himself. That was really originall please keep it up. I think that Harry and Remus have a lot of work to do before Harry will be able to forgive Remus again and vice versa. The same thing with Snape and Harry.
I would really like to start to see some Harry and Snape bonding like I said but you've done a fantastic job so far and I know you'll keep it up please update soon!
| Title: Harry
| 16 May 2005 11:53 am
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| Reviewer: Sarah Lotus (Anonymous)
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Ooh, you've put it up here, too! *grins* I've been following this on FFN (and I still will, since P & S doesn't have author alerts yet, sadly!) but I thought I'd leave you a review here, since you don't have too many and this story deserves heaps.
I sound like I'm 15, sorry, I don't have time to proofread. It occurs to me that one of the major things still between Severus and Harry is the name "Potter"; once Sev can bring himself to use "Harry", they will start to see eye to eye more. "Potter" is like a huge wall between them. You knew that, of course; you're putting it there deliberately, that's just my random intelligent thought for the day.
One last note--You may not have realised, but every chapter beyond 5 is titled "The Memory" here. I guess it defaults to the chapter one title? I thought I'd point it out so you could fix it. ;)
| Title: Harry
| 15 May 2005 11:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Ah, more of my fav story, great chapters, great story, keep it coming
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