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Reviews For In Blood Only
I love that Harry called him "Father". And thank God, Mione's back!
I'm glad Harry is starting to like Snape, but I can't help but think that that was the worse timing EVER to look at Snape with all that loving trust and warmth.
Good job Snape for being a good, though unconventional parent!
Well...Harry's life can't ever be easy lol
I admire his Gryffindor heart and courage, but if your friend is lying unconscious in the middle of a battle that Death Eaters are clearly getting the upper hand in, pray to your deity and get the hell out of there. Either way, I hope everyone ends up ok, including Tonks and Remus. Snape is going to be pissed about this...Death Eaters trying to kill HIS son. Also, another reviewer hinted that Snape should fudge Lupin's Wolfsbane potion because of what Lupin said. I think that's very cruel to do to someone that saved your son's life in the heat of the battle, and even keeped him from going BACK out to the battlefield because of his Gryffindor-ness, even if it would take a toll on him emotionally. Tampering with Wolfsbane potion can KILL the person or effect their mental state quite horribly. That's incredibly rude to do to someone after they saved someone's life that you care about. I think Harry has had enough rejection and emotional breakdowns, but honestly, one more wouldn't hurt if it saves his life. Hopefully they all get out of this icky situation and back to the school ok, or Lupin's comment did nothing. Dun dun dun dunnnnnnnnn 0_o
Also, awwwww about Harry craving that look of pride that most fathers have when thinking of their sons. I hope that Snape will come to love and be proud of Harry one day.
Your story is intriguing!
Btw, I was out swimming (which I don't get to do often at all), but I couldn't wait to get home so I could continue this fic! You're a good writer!
I totally agree with Dumbledoredore bliviatin' him. I sincerely doubt Severus will be able to control his "I hate Potters." tendencies too soon. He needs to grow up. And, it's sad that he cares more about the headmaster obliviating him, than he does about the fact that he has a son. Oh well, i'm sure things will get better. This is only chapter 2 of 45. Also, I think you should probably put better warnings up for your story. Like the bit between Sev and Lily, it's sexual and I know it's not as graphic as smut would be, but someone who may have a past of sexual abuse or something would deserve to have a bit of a warning before reading that. It is common courtesy. |
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