| Title: EPILOGUE: The Thorny Path
| 19 Mar 2011 11:11 am
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| Reviewer: lisa_tid (Anonymous)
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An absolutely brilliant story and I'm shocked it haven't gotten more reviews! I have never thought of Snape quite the way you show him in this story, but I buy it completely. When you wrote that their relationship would take time, I have to say I wasn't sure I would hold out. Well, I did, and I finished the whole thing in two days. Thank you!
| Title: Something New In The Air
| 24 Feb 2011 5:15 am
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| Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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All your chapters are so very clever, but THIS one, is your cleverest one!
The conversation btwn Snape and Harry...I was riveted! Harry's careful line of reasoning about Snape and Snape's father well that was nothing short of genious...I'm simply blown away.
Thank-you, I haven't read something this Brilliant in a very long time.
I loved Hagrid's cameo- very in character and absolutely endearing- and the Severus/Minerva/Harry interaction. The potions scene is beatifully portrayed and I loved how you described Severus' emotions on seeing the potion change
I really like the way in which you've portrayed Harry, from his reaction towards the news that Snape is his father, to his interaction with McGonagall. I thought the idea that Harry would use the cupboard as his metaphorical 'safe place' was inspired and I love the idea of Voldemort running off with a stewardess lol!
| Title: An Unfortunate Genetic Relationship
| 18 Aug 2010 7:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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I really loved how you've written this chapter; seeing the situation from first Harry's perspective, then Severus gives a really interesting insight into the characters thoughts and emotions. I also like the dynamic you've created between the Gryffs- their conversation felt very natural and realistic
I love your portrayal of Severus, he's completely in character, both in emotions and thought-processes, something one rarely sees in fanfic. His interaction with Dumbledore is masterfully depicted. Great job!
Great intro: I absolutely loved your use of Lockheart's penchant for memory charms- so clever and original!
| Title: EPILOGUE: The Thorny Path
| 23 May 2010 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: Peach (Anonymous)
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A perfect end! I really enoyed reading this fic because the progression in the relationships was not rushed and only subtly noticeable.
Bravo! I love it. A very well-done piece.
| Title: EPILOGUE: The Thorny Path
| 03 Oct 2009 1:38 am
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| Reviewer: CF (Anonymous)
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I genuinely love this story. It is one of the very few stories in the fanfiction world that is spot-on plausible. Snape is a bastard you have changed or exaggerated aspects of his personality. He is still a bastard at the end of it, harsh, cold, and uncompromising. Harry doesn't go around throwing to the whole of Hogwarts comments about the Dursleys. There's no mention of abuse and he isn't sickeningly fragile. He understands that Snape's a git, he doesn't become emotional around him or forget what Snape is. I love how the story unfolds while staying true to the characters.
Thank you for a truly wonderful read and for not writing a sequel. This seems like the perfect place to end it. A perfectly subtle note.
CF
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