| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 13 Aug 2008 4:55 am
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| Reviewer: KDuckeyD (Anonymous)
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Well thought out story line that keeps things interesting. Multiple characters who all have well defined personalities. Thanks for your hard work.
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 16 Apr 2008 9:10 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow, awesome chapter!! I was so amused by all the teacher's reactions to Harry's illness, and even Ron's. They wouldn't let him get a word in edgewise!! LOL! That was great. And poor Snape.
The training plans sound awesome. I can't wait to read them!
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 16 Mar 2008 6:01 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Yeah, the site is back up and I can leave feedback! I hate to say it, but if I'd been Harry, I might have done the exact same thing in order to avoid going with that woman and getting into trouble again. However, if I'd been Snape, I'd probably have flipped out too once I'd learned it had all been an act! LOL! I can easily see both of their POV's!
Great chapter hon!
Tracy
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next upate! >
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 25 Feb 2008 7:17 pm
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| Reviewer: lily (Anonymous)
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Aww, really cute chapter. Harry is so cute I love how Madam Pomfrey kept saying he was delicate and stuff and he was getting offended. I also really liked the way that Snape came in all worried, like a real father would. And Harry was arguing with him after which indicates that he is feeling comfortable enough with Snape to argue with him. It was a really good chapter. Oh and thanks for the update!
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 25 Feb 2008 2:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Oooh!!! I have been waiting for an update of this story for forever!!!! I love this series and I hope that you get the time to update soon. The Snape and Harry you portray are so adorable and at the same time, realistic. Well, as realistic as they can be, considering they characters in a book that's revolving around magic.-grins-
The last two chapters have been great! I can just see Harry panicking and deciding to fake sick to get out of the situation with Moretta, like anyone might at that age, and then the situation blowing up out of control as it wouldn't had he been anyone else.
I'm so glad that you are still updating this story and I hope you'll post more soon - I am really wanting to know what horrible thing Snape is expecting to happen this year. Harry is so oblivious but you've done a nice job of foreshadowing thru Snape.
Oh - and I really liked Dumbledore's plain speaking moment a couple of chapters back. Nice to see him drop the twinkles for a moment!
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