| Title: Chapter 10 - Guilty
| 16 Apr 2008 9:18 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Scary last line!!!
Great chapter!! I feel sorry for Harry's haircut. Maybe he can drink a potion to make his hair grow?
| Title: Chapter 10 - Guilty
| 16 Mar 2008 6:14 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Harry certainly finds himself full of conflicting loyalties. At least he was willing to admit that Draco had every right to react the way he did when he found out what Harry had told Ron.
The haircut bit was too damn funny!
Another great chapter hon!
Tracy
Good chapter. I liked the part where Harry calls he's hair bad. My nephew does it all the time
| Title: Chapter 10 - Guilty
| 07 Mar 2008 5:15 pm
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| Reviewer: lily (Anonymous)
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This was a great chapter. I love the haircut bit. Harry is so adorable. The part with Malfoy was realistic because he would be mortified to know that Ron of all people knew that Snape spanked him. I also like the part with Ron wanting to hear more because Draco has been really mean to him in the past. Hermione was torn because she cares about Ron but she doesnt want to be cruel.
I like how Harry was scared that they would ask about his own punishments and that he enjoyed Snape saying "At this rate people will think you're Lupin's son, instead of mine." And then the "Bad hair. Bad bad hair" bit was hilarious!
Update again soon plz!
I love your story.
I am so incrediably happy you updated this story! You did a really good job making the characters sound cannon, and you added both humor and some seriousness. Ron made me laugh when he was going on about Draco's punnishement, I felt like Harry's reaction. Draco does diserve some embarrassment because he is so bloody awful to the Weasleys, but I have to admit that it was bad of Harry to tell them of his punnishments. I had to laugh when Harry was chased, poor bloke was in deep trouble. Severus's comments made me smirk in amusement. This new training room sounds interesting, cant wait untill they try it out. Wonderful work with this story, you've gone a really great job so far. PLEASE post again soon!
Ha! Nice touch with the 5-year-old's haircut!
nice chapter, harry deserved to be punched by draco and can't wait to find more about the training room and the d.a
| Title: Chapter 10 - Guilty
| 05 Mar 2008 6:12 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh, scary room! Tehe! Oh poor Harry with that haircut!! Maybe Ginny can take pity on him and fix it a little? Good chapter! thanks for the update!
I'm trying to be very open minded about everyone's POV in this story, that being said. Sure Harry had absolutely no right to blab to anyone about personal things that happen between Draco and Sev, especially given what a huge blabbermouth and git Ron is. That being said it was really rotten of Draco to go after Harry like he did. That being said can I say that I LOVE LOVE LOVE the haircut scene between Harry and Sev, the banter between the two was priceless. I also liked the fact that the banter came without any repercussions from Sev, but maybe he thought Harry had gotten enough from Draco. I can't wait for the next update really curious to see what's going to happen next. Especially the training and the DA now that Sev has implemented all these new "rules". Keep up the awesome work and please please try and update again soon. LES
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