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Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 23 Jul 2008 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Fantastic way to have it happen! I love how Snape handled it!
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 06 Jul 2008 6:01 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I want more please! Please ma'am, may i have some more? Lol. There were a few mispelt words, said, stomach and another were spelt wrong just so you know. I enjoyed this a lot, thanks.
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 30 Jun 2008 4:44 pm
Reviewer: pearlk9 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dear pdantzler,
    I have been reading your story and it’s prequel A Time and a Place to Grow but this is the first time I have sent you a review. I want to tell you that you are a wonderful writer and I have looked forward to reading all your stories either at this site and other sites. This new chapter of A Time and a Place to Learn --- WOW!!! Intense is to mild a word for this chapter.

    In my mind Harry has 3(at least) things he needs to apologize to Snape for. First, as you wrote by Harry taking the blame for Worty, he is showing him a bad example that it is ok not to take responsibility for your mistakes. This goes further because Snape is Worty’s Head of House, he is Worty’s Hogwort “parent” for the next 6 years. With Worty’s guilty feelings about this incident, he will probably not seek Snape out for advice or help as he should have and who knows how this will affect his entire school career.

    Next, Harry is still lying to Snape after all they have been through over the summer and this school year so far to develop a good relationship. Snape is not the enemy and each time Harry lies to him they have to spend time again and again repairing that relationship instead of making it stronger to fight Voldemot. Also by lying, Harry is showing his friends that he doesn’t completely trust Snape either so they are still going to have doubts about him especially Ron.

    Lastly, Harry has always yearned for a Home, a Family and a Father. By Snape adopting him, Harry now has all of those things and he should be loyal to the man who has made whose yearnings possible. At the end of your story A Time and a Place to Grow just before Harry gets on the train to go back to Hogworts, Snape tells him to remember 2 things “you are my Son now and I love you”. Harry needs to not only apologize to Snape, he needs to apologize to his Father.

    I’m going to patiently wait (or not) for your next chapter to see what happens.

    Pearl

    Author's Response: That's a lot for poor Harry to have to keep up with - hopefully I can remember them all when I write the next chapter. I'm glad you reviewed - writers always like to know that people apprecaite out stuff or at least that they're reading. I promise to write again as soon as I can. Thanks!
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 30 Jun 2008 7:17 am
Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Poor Snape. What is with Harry? Why does he keep lying? I think he will be feeling like a toad once the guilt sets in. Harry will be begging for that spanking a lot sooner than he thinks.
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 29 Jun 2008 11:03 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW! I loved this chapter,I've read it three times today (LOL) I am so looking forward to the "Harry figuring out what to do" part.
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 28 Jun 2008 7:35 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 27 Jun 2008 7:35 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    poor old harry he is dammed if he does and dammed if he don't with snape, he wasn't doing any harm only trying to protect worty, worty has grown on me and i would like to give him a hug and what a punishment harry has waiting for him, i think he should get it over with soon, i know i wouldn't want that hanging over my head
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 27 Jun 2008 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    It is amazing that when Harry was first being punished he actually started having hateful feelings towards Snape, not dad not Sev but Snape it was as if all their time together did not happen, Harry actually called him a cruel sadistic monster (because Harry knew he did nothing wrong – but clearly forgetting that Sev did not know this and that Harry himself had lied to him). But Sev realized that something was wrong, he knows his son, he knew that something was not right and I think that part of why Harry got spanked after is that he forced his father to severely punish him for something that he did not do and it made Sev feel like a monster. What Harry did in trying to protect Worty is accused Sev of being a monster and Harry almost made him become that… which is really not what their relationship has been – Sev has been a loving kind father to Harry and I am sure it broke Sev’s heart when he realized that Harry still thought of him like that. Harry does have a lot of thinking to do and when he does he will realize how much he has hurt his dad who loves him very much and he will admit that he deserves more than 30 with the hairbrush

    Author's Response: I'm glad you saw it, too. I was afraid the argument between Snape and Harry was too confusing and convoluted, but you obviously got all the points I wanted to make. I will be writing more on this soon, hoepfully.
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 27 Jun 2008 6:29 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well that was... unexpected. But I really, really enjoyed it.

    I hope Harry doesn't avoid his father forever - I'd hate to see their new relationship die because of it. And... I know Draco is in this story and really I have no problem with it but I'm going to ask anyway. Is this going to turn into a story surrounding Harry and Severus and Draco?

    Update soon.

    Yours,
    Lady Jewels Snape.
Title: Chapter 14 - Loyal 27 Jun 2008 4:07 pm
Reviewer: Silent_Soliloquy318(not signed in) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oops, I wrong thank.....lol I meant thank her every day lol..I need to start proofreading my reviews for typos!

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