| Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded
| 02 Sep 2008 6:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry! I really like his character in this story and Snape's too. I love the part where Harry said "He killed me. He made me hug him, and it killed me. I'm - I'm dead now." Lolz that was totally adorable.
What has Snape got planned now?????????? Update soon please!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded
| 17 Aug 2008 2:56 am
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| Reviewer: pearlk9 (Anonymous)
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Now that Harry’s punishment for lying is over everything is just fine between he and Snape--- right? If that were true you would have to end your great story now. Luckily for your readers the story goes on.
Only Snape could take a potential heart warming moment like hugging Harry after spanking him and make it an order with further spanking if the order wasn’t followed. Thankfully Harry had the perfect comeback. If the two of them aren’t careful they will continue to show signs that they are becoming a true family.
I must admit that I didn’t understand the part about the importance of Snape’s wish that the war was over and the adoption wouldn’t have to be a secret any more. Are you giving hints about events later in the story?
Finally, I know Snape wouldn’t be Snape if he wasn’t pushing Harry to do his best in learning to fight and win against Voldemort but 3 dragons?
WHAT ON EARTH! THATS INTENSE! I loveeee this story! loveeee it! But I must admit to really not trusting our new potions mistress... and I still haven't forgotten the little fact that she knew everyone's first names in advance.. which made me think of Tonks. But naturally I'm not so sure about that now. Excellent story! I hope for an update when its convenient for you!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded
| 10 Aug 2008 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Raeltsa (Anonymous)
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Wow, I can't wait for more!
I like Harry and Severus figuring out their relationship together. You're doing a nice job; thanks for your hard work.
Wonderful Chapter! I love how Harry is acting like a "normal" teenager! He so deserves that!
what? omg, he's a bit into the whole training thing, isn't he? the real harry had no training and he managed to get himself properly killed and resurrected.
| Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded
| 08 Aug 2008 2:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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Poot Harry. Snape never gives him a break. Looking forward to more.
Well, that's one way to throw Harry in the deep end. I really liked the hug scene with Harry and Snape :D That was evil foreshadowing you put in; please don't kill off Severus. *begs*
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