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Title: Chapter 17 - Dragons 26 Sep 2008 3:14 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape's a good daddy.
Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded 26 Sep 2008 3:01 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!!
Title: Chapter 15 - He Lied 26 Sep 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: Chapter 17 - Dragons 25 Sep 2008 7:17 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad to see you updated Sev and Harry's relationship is really going great more of a mixture of father/son and friends. Sev just loves to complain but if you look closely you would hear the pride and love, mixed with the worry.
Title: Chapter 17 - Dragons 25 Sep 2008 7:08 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    You totally made my day with this update. It seems so long since we've heard from you, so welcome back.

    Loved the chapter, as usual. The dragon scenes were brilliantly written. I could completely see it playing out in my head as I read it. Great descriptions. I knew that Snape wasn't going to be very happy with Harry for how he handled it. Harry has to go all Cowboy and do it his way when Snape is trying to teach him other ways. Typical, huh?

    Still not sure what I think about Moretta. Harry obviously dislikes her, and I'm not sure that Snape likes her either. But, Snape seems to trust her. I wonder why?

    Thanks again for the update. Hope RL is nice to you. Take care.
Title: Chapter 17 - Dragons 25 Sep 2008 4:26 am
Reviewer: kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant chapter!
    i love your Harry and Snape dynamic it is truely unmatched by anything I have ever read, I'm surprised Snape didn't punish Harry...care to explain?
    The end of that story made me ready to go to bed, yaaawn.
    ;)
    Great Chapter
    your updates take too long btw
    lots of love
    Kella
Title: Chapter 17 - Dragons 25 Sep 2008 12:06 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooo!! love the chapter! Poor Harry, killing the dragons when he was supposed to capture them. Loved the descriptions of the bath, makes me want one now. :) thank you for the update!! Assign shorter assignments and you'll have time to grade them all. ;)
Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded 02 Sep 2008 6:34 pm
Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! I really like his character in this story and Snape's too. I love the part where Harry said "He killed me. He made me hug him, and it killed me. I'm - I'm dead now." Lolz that was totally adorable.
    What has Snape got planned now?????????? Update soon please!
Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded 17 Aug 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: pearlk9 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Now that Harry’s punishment for lying is over everything is just fine between he and Snape--- right? If that were true you would have to end your great story now. Luckily for your readers the story goes on.

    Only Snape could take a potential heart warming moment like hugging Harry after spanking him and make it an order with further spanking if the order wasn’t followed. Thankfully Harry had the perfect comeback. If the two of them aren’t careful they will continue to show signs that they are becoming a true family.

    I must admit that I didn’t understand the part about the importance of Snape’s wish that the war was over and the adoption wouldn’t have to be a secret any more. Are you giving hints about events later in the story?

    Finally, I know Snape wouldn’t be Snape if he wasn’t pushing Harry to do his best in learning to fight and win against Voldemort but 3 dragons?
Title: Chapter 15 - He Lied 17 Aug 2008 2:19 am
Reviewer: pearlk9 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    When I reviewed the last chapter I said I couldn’t wait for this one to be posted. Unfortunately I didn’t have much of a chance to read chapter 15 until now.

    I thought the way you wrote about Harry’s soul searching was very realistic. Harry’s guilt about lying to Snape and not resolving the conflict between them made him grumpy to his friends, angry at Snape and even short tempered with himself. I think that for once Harry’s eavesdropping on the conversation between Snape and McGonagall was a good thing. I’m not sure Harry would have understood Snape’s feelings about their quarrel as well if he hadn’t heard their talk. I loved the comment when McGonagall told Snape to “Go deal with Harry or she would deal with him”. McGonagall sure pulled no punches with Snape in that talk!

    Snape and Harry dealt with some very important issues that were still coming between them. I liked that Harry still stood up to Snape about mistakes made by both of them past and present while apologizing for lying and Snape admitted that they both were still learning to be father and son. The best part for me was that finally Harry told Snape –his Dad- that he loved him!

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