WHAT ON EARTH! THATS INTENSE! I loveeee this story! loveeee it! But I must admit to really not trusting our new potions mistress... and I still haven't forgotten the little fact that she knew everyone's first names in advance.. which made me think of Tonks. But naturally I'm not so sure about that now. Excellent story! I hope for an update when its convenient for you!
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 13 Aug 2008 4:55 am
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| Reviewer: KDuckeyD (Anonymous)
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Well thought out story line that keeps things interesting. Multiple characters who all have well defined personalities. Thanks for your hard work.
| Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded
| 10 Aug 2008 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Raeltsa (Anonymous)
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Wow, I can't wait for more!
I like Harry and Severus figuring out their relationship together. You're doing a nice job; thanks for your hard work.
Wonderful Chapter! I love how Harry is acting like a "normal" teenager! He so deserves that!
what? omg, he's a bit into the whole training thing, isn't he? the real harry had no training and he managed to get himself properly killed and resurrected.
| Title: Chapter 16 - Bonded
| 08 Aug 2008 2:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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Poot Harry. Snape never gives him a break. Looking forward to more.
Well, that's one way to throw Harry in the deep end. I really liked the hug scene with Harry and Snape :D That was evil foreshadowing you put in; please don't kill off Severus. *begs*
Well, first of all, thank you for taking some time away from writing your thesis to write another chapter! It gave me a nice break from writing my own thesis! :) This is one of my favorite chapters yet. I love this story. You used a couple of literary devices here that I really liked. I liked how the chapter started out in the middle of the *action* and then went back to the beginning. And I liked the subtle use of foreshadowing throughout. Your writing was good to begin with, but I think it is getting even better with time!
LOL Too Funny! Great Chapter! Loved the last words!
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