Wow! Fantastic way to have it happen! I love how Snape handled it!
very good resolution to their conflict!
What a heartfelt end of chapter. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 15 - He Lied
| 15 Jul 2008 4:12 am
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| Reviewer: Christine (Anonymous)
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Ah, the moment we've all been waiting for - the day Harry finally tells his father he loves him. =)
that was a great chapter, i really liked reading it, when will snape learn that all children lie either to get out of trouble or protect others but i'm glad they are finally sorting out there problems, i still don't like the moretta
| Title: Chapter 15 - He Lied
| 14 Jul 2008 8:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous)
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This was a very good chapter although I must say that a little bit of the dialogue on Harry’s part was slightly unrealistic. I liked the part where he overheard the conversation between Snape and McGonoggal. It was important to him understanding his father’s side of things and it also helped Snape to understand his own feelings. I like Harry feeling emotional after he argued with Snape and trying to hide it but still accepting the much-needed comfort from Snape and of course his cheekiness in the end lets us know that everything is much better between the pair. Overall, good chapter. Oh I have a suggestion about getting Harry a girlfriend (if you intend to do that) please don’t make it Ginny since so far she hasn’t been featured much in your stories and I also think that they are not exactly suited to each other. Harry has a father now who will introduce him to new people, perhaps he will find a girlfriend there? Just a little suggestion.
| Title: Chapter 15 - He Lied
| 14 Jul 2008 8:10 am
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| Reviewer: Lysitheia (Anonymous)
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I love it! I love how Snape's way of soothing Harry is scolding him- so Snape-like. Please update soon.
| Title: Chapter 15 - He Lied
| 14 Jul 2008 3:43 am
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| Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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great chpter!!!
keep updating!
| Title: Chapter 15 - He Lied
| 13 Jul 2008 4:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Intense chapter.
I enjoyed it very much.
But the two of them need to be smacked upside the head, they can be so daft sometimes.
Update soon, I'm very looking forward to more.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
I loved the fact that all the kids were brutally honest with each other it was funny. It was also nice to see Harry and Severus kind of starting over like Sev said with their fight. The ending about Harry's hair was priceless and I loved the fact that Sev squeezed in his own little protection and Harry love. Keep up the awesome work and please please update this again soon. I know you have lots of other stories going on, (which I love), but I can't wait to see the next chapter of this one. LES
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