Yey I like this chapter!! I loved the play between Draco and Harry. They seemed so wonderfully brotherly. Snape's plea to wait 'till Christmas was also really well done - very moving. :0)
Aw, that was so funny. I love Draco and Harry teasing, and wrestling with each other. Oh, and the food fight was hilarious.
You're on a roll PD!! Great job. Oh, and I want more of the House that Time Forgot Universe too. I'm greedy, aren't I? :)
sorry but have you posted chapter 22 ? because i have recived the info on the email that you posted it , but when i click on the link it open on a page of p&s but only whit the prase to be continued ...
Very well done! Brilliant chapie, please update soon!
Ugh. I hope that Harry doesn't sneak out for New Years, though I have a sneaking suspicion that he will. And Moretta's a right prat.
I don't think that I like that Harry milked the attention of the crowd. He always claims he doesn't like attention...
If Snape dies at the end of this story, I will be pissed. Just warning you.
| Title: Chapter 21 - Snow
| 17 Dec 2009 5:02 am
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| Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous)
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SO glad you haven’t given up on this story! This was a wonderfully amusing chapter.
I liked the beginning when Harry and Draco were talking about romance novels and Draco sort of defended them. That’s quite a guilty pleasure of his. XD
The conversation overheard in The Three Broomsticks was intriguing. Sounds like Snape is planning to do something to protect or help Harry in some way. I just hope he’s not going to sacrifice himself. That would be so sad! I’d cry. No joke.
I wonder if Snape will find out about the Firewhiskey, and if he does, how he’ll react. Harry didn’t intentionally order it, but he still did drink it, and he is underage. I’m sure Snape would not be pleased if he found out. Also I wonder if Draco has had any experience with alcohol since he seemed to know exactly how Snape would react if he were caught with it.
Luna is so sweet. I love her with Harry! I didn’t think I would like the idea of your Harry having a girlfriend, but I actually think it adds a lot to the story line. I can’t wait to see what happens now that they’re officially dating.
Harry must be an idiot to still be considering sneaking out. How is he going to leave the manor or explain his long absence to Snape? Plus, I’m sure Snape is already a little suspicious that Harry might try this since he threatened to when Snape said he wasn’t allowed to go. I hope he makes the right decision and stays at the manor.
I’m a bit surprised by Snape’s anger at Draco arranging a date for Harry and Luna and then Harry kissing her. I kind of expected him to slightly disapprove, make a few dry remarks, smirk, and then lay down the rules for dating. Instead he actually seems quite angry about the whole thing. I think that’s a bit unfair and I hope he calms down in the next chapter during their talk.
It’s great to see you’re back! I missed your stories so much, and now we have this plus the new THWTF one shot. Thanks for not giving up on your stories. You’re my favorite HP fanfic author.
| Title: Chapter 21 - Snow
| 16 Dec 2009 5:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear trouble ahead poor harry! I still hope he is not going to sneak out for New Year thank you for a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 21 - Snow
| 16 Dec 2009 8:23 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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So glad you posted - I really love this story. I think it's great that draco and harry are so natural together, and I have to get used to harry with luna, but whatever makes harry happy. I can't wait to see what snape says to them back at the manor. Please post soon!
I love!! Thanks so much for updating!!! SO CUTE!!! And I love Snape's reaction, too. :0)
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