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Title: Chapter 27: The Darkness Revealed 17 Apr 2023 5:04 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a powerful story. The chapter end was heartbreaking in a way.
Title: Chapter 27: The Darkness Revealed 25 Jun 2007 10:15 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Wonderful story... wonderful chapter. Intense as all get out! I can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 27: The Darkness Revealed 25 Jun 2007 3:12 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 27: The Darkness Revealed 24 Jun 2007 11:32 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! Utterly fantastic! How can you only have twenty some reviews for this story? I'm appalled by that fact. I have just spent over 30 almost consecutive hours reading both The Enemy Within, and all of the chapters of Harry Potter and the Chained Souls to date.

    I honestly have no idea where to begin. Your writing, for one is phenomenal. The language style that you use is wonderful. Your ability to produce plots and foreshadowing is none like I have ever seen in fanfiction. You completely nailed down both the characters mannerisms and personas to almost an exact art.

    Snape was completely perfect. I love the fact that unlike other stories, Snape did not change his attitude in a matter of chapters, or due to some eventful occurence. In Enemy Within even despite the fact that he was no a spy, he did not have a miraculous change into a cheery, happy person. I greatly respected that fact, along with your insight into his character.

    Your writing style at times left me breathless, or with my pulse racing. I have never read a story that was so clever as yours. I feel almost guilty for not going back and reviewing every single chapter, but my anticipation for what was to come caused me to rush on before I could review. I really really hope that there is another sequel that will be in the works at the finish of this story.
    Thank you thank you thank you for making the past two days of my life filled with enjoyable reading. You have an honest to God gift. I won't even compare you to J.K Rowling, because in some instances I feel that your writing is better than her own. Amazing job, and I wish that I had time to say more. However, I have to go to work in a couple of hours, and I haven't slept yet.

    I can't wait to see what is coming next. I have no doubt that it will be just as terrific as all of your previous chapters. I do hope that you will update soon! Thank you!

    Author's Response:

    Thirty hours?  My goodness!  I am truly honored that you spent so much time reading my stories and delighted beyond words that you found them worthwhile.  Thank you so much for an absolutely amazing review! - Theo

Title: Chapter 27: The Darkness Revealed 23 Jun 2007 3:29 am
Reviewer: rene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ack!! the end of your marvelous story is drawing closer! i have this torn feeling from desperately craving the next chapter or hoping that this fic never ends. : (

    ahh, choices, choices.

    but anyways, as always, your work is utterly amazing! you really take fantastic to a whole new level. *hugs*
Title: Chapter 27: The Darkness Revealed 23 Jun 2007 1:36 am
Reviewer: MorwenIsilwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I stand in unspeakable awe at your writing. Not only are you putting out the most amazing story ever, but also with long, frequent updates. You are just amazing.

    Author's Response: Oh my, I'm blushing now.
Title: Chapter 27: The Darkness Revealed 22 Jun 2007 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Eniledam (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww... very good! i love this fiction! There's so much emotion and your characterizations for the situations are very well done. When do you think the next one will be coming? I can hardly wait!

    Author's Response: The next chapter should be out on Tuesday.

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