| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 18 Dec 2010 5:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Tobien (Anonymous)
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Wow, mindblowing. I can't think of anything to add, this has been one hell of a ride and I feel richer for the experience! Thank you very much for this wonderful piece of craftmanship.
Tobien
I don't have words for how much I enjoyed both this and Enemy Within. Your stories rival JKR's originals.
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 24 Feb 2010 11:48 am
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| Reviewer: mika (Anonymous)
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AWESOME!
gosh. my eyes hurt. i couldnt stop.
and now im grinning from ear to ear and theres no way i can get any sleep^^
thank you so much!
before that AYLNO was my sole fave, but though its been a great story, yours was more thrilling , since i never could be sure what would happen next and i also thought that everyone was more in character that in most of the storysi read(right, pretty much all of them).
im feeling kinda like a happy corpse right now.
so now you're standing on aspens right foot sharing the first place in my list of people i adore^^
Author's Response: Now that is high praise indeed! AYLNO is legendary. I'm so glad you found the stories thrilling. (Sorry about the sleep-deprevation though.) I tried for a good balance of character development and action. And I truly appreciate the review. I love hearing that I've brightened someone's day. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 11 Feb 2010 7:41 pm
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| Reviewer: marajade179 (Anonymous)
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That story was amazing. I often go looking for a really excellent story about Severus and Harry working together and now i have found it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the review.
This was brilliant. I mean both stories in this series. They were excellent, they excited me, made me laugh out loud and cry in despair.
Two great stories that could have worked in canon. Everything was clearly logical and I enjoyed Harry's way to kill Voldemort very much. It was realistic, to say the least.
Well, I am bad in giving review on stories I truly enjoyed. I can hardly describe the rollercoaster of emotions I felt while reading. But I hope I did get my point across.
Author's Response: I think you give lovely reviews! I'm very glad you enjoyed the stories so much. Thank you for letting me know. :)
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 03 Jan 2010 2:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Keina (Signed)
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I am SO impressed with this story!The storyboard is incredible, and you left nothing to chance, everything was just terribly efficient! This is really one of the best written stories I read in this categorie, thanks a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it and I truly appreciate your thoughtful comments.
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 29 Aug 2009 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Kikimorra (Signed)
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Thank you a thousand times. This is a brilliant story. The best part, for me, was your timing: every time Harry suddenly remembers something, I, too, remember it, and find that I have thoroughly forgotten about it! This is fantastic, it makes the characters so convincing! I am in a bad habit of agonizing over answers that I remember and the characters forgot, and this story is like a paradise to me. Besides, I, too, didn't trust Ryan, but aknowledge my mistake. I, too, suspected Snape of murders (although in Harry's shoes I wouldn't be worried for the victims, only for Snape's soul, but I'm a sociopath 8)) ). I even almost didn't suspect Knight! And I had no idea about Kreacher! But in the end it all adds up so neatly that I couldn't find a fauld if I tried. Thank you once again, this was worth every minute of the sleepless nights I devoted to it 8)))
Author's Response: Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm so glad the characters are convincing. I, too, hate it when I read a story and the characters have overlooked something that I find obvious, so I'm happy to have avoided that here. Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad the sleepless nights were worth it. :)
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 01 Aug 2009 9:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Claire (Anonymous)
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That was magnificent. Never before have I read a fanfiction on this site in which the characters retained their identities from the novel so accurately- Severus Snape in particular. The plot itself was creative genius, actually more enjoyable in some regards than the last two Harry Potter novels. The ending tied up every loose end beautifully, giving a sense of satisfaction JKR failed to deliver to any Snape follower. Thank you.
Author's Response: Wow! 'Creative genius' is quite a compliment. I'm glad I was able to tie up so many loose ends and give you a sense of satisfaction. Thank you for reading.
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 06 Jul 2009 7:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Eriellix (Anonymous)
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Awesome series! The characters, especially Harry and Snape were definitely true to their character; and there was just the right amount of suspense and tugging of heartstrings and everything else that makes a good story in this two part series. I haven't enjoyed a story as much as this one in quite some time. I'm sure it took a lot of planning and hard work to write this - Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Yes, the stories took quite a bit of work - 18 and 19 months respectively to write - but it was definitely a labor of love. I'm glad you enjoyed them. :)
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 17 Feb 2009 8:38 am
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| Reviewer: Joe Blow (Anonymous)
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Wow. I can't believe I've never read your fics before. These are FANTASTIC. Seriously. I hope you write your own original fiction or something, because you have great ability. Your' characterization was among the best I've ever read, and it was refreshing to see Harry and Snape's relationship done so very well. The average fic makes them father and son within the first few chapters and ignores all the HISTORY, as if it never mattered. So I applaud your fic. It was a fantastic read!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the stories. :)
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