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Title: Chapter 18: Deceptions and Designs 29 May 2007 8:47 am
Reviewer: MorwenIsilwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've been meaning to drop you a review or so ever since I saw you posting here. I just want you to know that I love your series and can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 17: Mist and Mysteries 25 May 2007 10:50 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting chapter - thanks for sharing it with us :-)
Title: Chapter 14: Castle in the Mind 16 May 2007 4:32 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent way for Dumbledore to find out some of how Harry really thinks about Snape and the conflict it raises within him. It's too bad Harry won't remember it, but canon Harry isn't often highly self-aware anyway, so maybe it's something Harry's personality wouldn't deal well with facing up front anyway.
Title: Chapter 11: Dumbledore's Garden 16 May 2007 4:25 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, according to Ron's revelations, Knight has reason to particularly hate death eaters. And with Snape's comments about Harry mistrusting aurors, I wonder if I should be suspicious.
Title: Chapter 12: Tea and Immortality 16 May 2007 4:17 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the way you get into the landscape of the mind with this and have Harry begin to learn about it through Dumbledore.

    Great job of working in canon info about the horcruxes.
Title: Chapter 10: The Hogwarts Express 16 May 2007 4:14 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I noticed a recent review wondering why Harry automatically assumes Snape is guilty. I can't recall if you refer to it during this book, but in Enemy Within, Harry *knows* that Snape very efficiently killed a number of Death Eaters after he and Harry were attacked on the road. I always felt you did an excellent job there with Harry's reaction to Snape's ability to do that. And it therefore always has made sense to me in this book that Harry would quickly assume that Snape is indeed the one behind these deaths. And you're right, it fits in with canon Harry to always think that Snape is likely to do practically anything.

    Very excellent story, btw. I haven't been reviewing here, as I'm reading it on one of the other sites most of the time.
Title: Chapter 10: The Hogwarts Express 08 May 2007 1:28 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the story and will continue reading it, but still I wonder why Harry doesn´t consider the possibility of Snape beeing innocent. After all there is a thing called the presumption of innocence.

    Author's Response:

    Harry has ALWAYS believed the worst of Snape.  Harry now respects the man, cares about him and trusts him as an ally against Voldemort.  But his underlying assumptions about Snape's character haven't really changed and he has no problem believing Snape capable of killing in cold blood, especially after what Voldemort put him through.  

    Also, Harry is out of his depth because he hasn't had to deal with this sort muddied issue before.  His challenges have all been blackand white: stop the evil guys from doing something despicable and/or save his own life.  The closest he's ever come to dealing with shades of gray was in Snape's Worst Memory when he had to come to grips with the fact that James and Sirius weren't always perfect people.  And the kid was traumatized by it.  That however was an incident from the past before he was born and since Sirius died soon after, it isn't something Harry has to deal with in his life.  Snape is. 

    Snape told Harry that there is a difference between being of age and being an adult.  That's true and it has little to do with bravery.  It's about understanding others and oneself.  Though Harry is mature beyond his years in some ways, he is still very much a child in this department.  Snape presents Harry with an invaluable opportunity to test his own presumptions and prejudices and in doing so, to grow up. 

Title: Chapter 9: What Seeds are Sown 04 May 2007 8:18 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter - thanks for sharing it with us :-). Please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 8: Friends and Allies 02 May 2007 11:21 am
Reviewer: katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this series is some of the best writing I have ever encountered on a fanfic. another amazing chapter, well done!
Title: Chapter 7: Moody's Mission 30 Apr 2007 8:51 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Listen to that voice, Harry.

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