| Title: Chapter 13: Slytherin's Secrets
| 16 Apr 2023 12:59 am
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This was fun, but so typically Harry.
| Title: Chapter 12: Tea and Immortality
| 16 Apr 2023 12:40 am
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This was a masterful use of Alice in Wonderland. Totally delightful. These lessons are captivating.
| Title: Chapter 11: Dumbledore's Garden
| 15 Apr 2023 8:07 pm
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That was utterly fascinating!
| Title: Chapter 10: The Hogwarts Express
| 15 Apr 2023 1:10 am
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Good decision, Harry. Thanks for the fun read so far.
| Title: Chapter 9: What Seeds are Sown
| 15 Apr 2023 1:04 am
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Terrific chapter. The conversation with Dumbledore was great, as was the outcome in giving Harry clarity.
| Title: Chapter 8: Friends and Allies
| 15 Apr 2023 12:48 am
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Snape’s trick was skillfully executed. Fantastic chapter. I hope that Harry doesn’t trust Moody.
| Title: Chapter 7: Moody's Mission
| 14 Apr 2023 11:14 pm
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This was a wonderfully eventful chapter. I can feel how torn Harry is about his task. I’m rooting for Snape.
| Title: Chapter 6: A Portrait in Black
| 14 Apr 2023 9:38 pm
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That was really touching, but in such a beautifully subtle way. Thanks for the great chapter.
Thanks for the intense and action-packed chapter. Snape has excellent instincts, as always.
| Title: Chapter 4: License to Apparate
| 14 Apr 2023 11:58 am
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Snape’s so right that Harry isn’t an ordinary teenager and can’t expect to be treated as one. I wonder why they didn’t use poly juice (timed to wear off at the apparition testing center) or apparate to and from the testing center.
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