Once again, a completely brilliant story!! This was absolutely amazing! You have quite a talent and I'm utterly blown away. The level of detail, the characterizations, everything was just incredible. Thank you for sharing this!
Amazing story I am do glad I found and read it :)
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 03 Mar 2011 12:38 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This was a really awesome story.
It cost me a lot of hours of sleep, but it was worth it.
Thank you so much!
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 26 Jan 2011 9:44 pm
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| Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed)
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AMAZING! :D
this was so so so good and i'm really sad that i've finished it! :(
xxxx
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 26 Dec 2010 8:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Chanel (Anonymous)
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Freakin awesome story. Thanks! Love.
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 18 Dec 2010 5:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Tobien (Anonymous)
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Wow, mindblowing. I can't think of anything to add, this has been one hell of a ride and I feel richer for the experience! Thank you very much for this wonderful piece of craftmanship.
Tobien
I don't have words for how much I enjoyed both this and Enemy Within. Your stories rival JKR's originals.
I have read and reread this story a number of times. The tension in this chapter as polyjuiced Severus impersonates Lucius is very well written. But I simply must comment on that wonderfully funny throwaway line you have before he even leaves Hogwarts. It's at dinner, while he's at the feast, waiting to leave, his nerves acting up a bit: "Snape knew that if he came face to face with the snake there was a very good chance that he wouldn’t walk out again.
'Chicken, Severus?' McGonagall said pleasantly.
'Of course not,' Snape snarled, glaring at the woman sitting next to him.
McGonagall blinked at him, obviously taken aback, but she recovered her composure at once and her smile was only slightly strained as she set down the dish of roast chicken..." Now that was cute and funny! No one else has ever mentioned it, and I really thought it deserved to be, so I finally acknowledged what a great little rim-shot joke that was!
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 24 Feb 2010 11:48 am
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| Reviewer: mika (Anonymous)
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AWESOME!
gosh. my eyes hurt. i couldnt stop.
and now im grinning from ear to ear and theres no way i can get any sleep^^
thank you so much!
before that AYLNO was my sole fave, but though its been a great story, yours was more thrilling , since i never could be sure what would happen next and i also thought that everyone was more in character that in most of the storysi read(right, pretty much all of them).
im feeling kinda like a happy corpse right now.
so now you're standing on aspens right foot sharing the first place in my list of people i adore^^
Author's Response: Now that is high praise indeed! AYLNO is legendary. I'm so glad you found the stories thrilling. (Sorry about the sleep-deprevation though.) I tried for a good balance of character development and action. And I truly appreciate the review. I love hearing that I've brightened someone's day. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 11 Feb 2010 7:41 pm
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| Reviewer: marajade179 (Anonymous)
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That story was amazing. I often go looking for a really excellent story about Severus and Harry working together and now i have found it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the review.
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