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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
He was even pleasantly surprised to find that it wasn’t all drudgery. Once he got past the dull introductory chapters, there were quite a few fascinating facts about Occlumency and tactics an Occlumens could use. It wasn’t all about fending off attacks, he learned; it was also about mastering misdirection. When he got to the chapter about ways in which strong emotion could be tethered to specific memories, which could then be used to misdirect a Legilimens, he read the chapter twice through and marked it for future study. I just ask cause that's kind of what barru did with Voldemort. He used the emotion of love and those memories which really fucked with Voldemort s head. Idk if that was done on purpose. I already think your fucking brilliant and if it was done on purpose than that just shows even more brilliance than I realized lol but if not: don't worry. You're still brilliant Author's Response: Thanks so so much for the review! I love it when people pull out things that I put in the story, not sure if anybody would ever notice. :) Honestly, I do put seemingly inconsequential things in that I plan on being important later, but sometimes I also get inspired by past chapters to expound on things that weren't necessarily planned. This one was about half and half. I knew that I wanted Harry to use that bit of Occlumency and that it would tie into his battle with Voldemort, but I wasn't 100% certain yet exactly how it would play out. :)
Author's Response: She's so fun, I couldn't leave her out! I'm glad you like her inclusion. :)
Author's Response: Yes, I have to remind myself that when I get to reading a story, many times I flip straight the next chapter or story and don't pause to review. Writing certainly has helped me to be more aware of it and to start leaving more reviews. :)
Author's Response: Haha thank you!!! I haven't gotten as many comments for this chapter on the other site I'm posting either. I was starting to wonder if there's something wrong with it, but you made it all better by making me laugh. :)
Author's Response: Yay another review! Thank you! I'm excited to get to the next chapter. I think the boys are ready to make some progress, don't you? ;) |
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