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Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 07 Jul 2020 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I hope Remus and Harry continue to have a good relationship in the story
Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 16 Oct 2019 1:14 pm
Reviewer: Kikimorra (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi there) Somehow I missed this chapter notification and only read it now(( And maaan what a cliffhanger. I'm actually quite anxious for Harry as he steps through the door >.

    Author's Response: Hi there! So glad you enjoyed it! And now you don't have to wait as long for the next chapter, so - win! ;) 
Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 10 Oct 2019 11:22 am
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    A marvellous, marvellous story, this is!
    Yay, you took it up again... Brilliant!
    God how I wish the other WIP-wonderful- stories, written both here and other places, would be completed too. by other diligent authors. It is a HeartWrench every time when I come to a halt... over a cliffie.. hate it....the worst is about 80 per cent of the time it will happen. Please, writer-esses, do write fewer stories, and complete more often. A deep prayer.
    Well, I loved the title, it makes me feel like Nigella Lawson sneaking into the quiet room to raid the fridge, and I adore how the two wary 'boys' use their fingertips and body-voice to speak together as much as their words. They are so good at mirroring each other. Your story really does fill in the empty space in 'opus Harry P.' where they didn't reach each other. You have helped me find that joy. Have a good seminar and I look forward to read more. It is always welcome.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! I'm so glad I decided to get back to this story. I tried every year or two during my hiatus without success, and I think I finally realized that it was going to haunt me forever until I just took the plunge and did it. So far no regrets, and everybody has been so supportive. :) Thank you for the kind words! I am so so glad that you are enjoying the story and that you enjoy their "body speak." :)

    P.S. What is 'opus Harry P.'?

Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 10 Oct 2019 4:11 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed the kitchen scene with Harry and Snape. When Snape told Harry to sit down and that he was still his guardian. I was pretty sure he was going to have “the talk” about him being up in the attic with two girls! Too bad Harry cut him off. 😄

    I really enjoy your writing. Thank you for sharing it!

    Author's Response:

    Haha it's tempting to include "a talk" now, you have no idea!! I'm not sure either of our boys would make it through a conversation like that in one piece at this point in their relationship, lol. 

Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 10 Oct 2019 12:34 am
Reviewer: Xedra (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying how Harry and Snape's relationship is building. And I like how you smoothed things over between Harry and Remus, too.

    Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I wasn't sure how the Remus scene would be received, so I'm happy that you liked it too. :) Thanks for the review!

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