| Title: Chapter 27 - Occlumency, Part 1
| 19 Oct 2019 3:08 am
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| Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
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I promise you that this "boring occlumency stuff" is not at all boring. this is the most interested take on occlumency that I have EVER read. love it!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I had a few different ideas about how to do the Occlumency lesson, and this one was the one I thought I'd most want to read, so that's what I wrote. I'm so glad that you liked it!! Thanks for taking the time to let me know. :)
This story is absolutely amazing! Your characterizations are so accurate. I like the slow changes being made in Harry and Snape's relationship because it just feels so much more like them. This chapter was one of my favorites so far. I was interested in how you were going to portray the first Occlumency lesson, and you did not disappoint. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so happy that you're enjoying it. :) I'm glad that you like the pace of their relationship. Sometimes I worry it's going too slow (even though it's going faster than it probably would in real life). But it's the pace I feel comfortable with, and I don't want to rush anything. So it makes me happy to hear positive feedback about it. :)
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