| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 08 Jul 2020 3:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter, when will Severus start to give Harry the support he needs? I feel like shaking him!
| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 07 Feb 2020 1:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved Harry’s stream of conscience and the interactions with Snape.
Author's Response: Thank you!! That was fun to write. :)
| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 20 Dec 2019 5:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed)
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"and being close to anything more human than a toad" jajaja
Btw...Great chapter, as always :3
Author's Response: That was a fun line to write. I might have cracked myself up more than the line deserved. ;)
| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 17 Dec 2019 4:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Kikimorra (Signed)
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Forgot to rate))
Author's Response: Thank you for rating :) :)
| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 16 Dec 2019 6:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Kikimorra (Signed)
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I've been saving this up for a quiet moment to enjoy because stories take some focus to get back in after a break) and man was I rewarded))) loved the embarrassing truth that Snape saw, that was so juicy))) also, with an ending like this, I kinda suspect something terrible to happen in the next chapter. Congrats on NaNo, I did send you an invitation on the NaNo website, but it's way too confusing for my simple mind, so I ended up completely messing up my profile and goals, and the whole thing did nothing for my writing progress. Maybe next year I get someone to tutor me 😂
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you liked the chapter! I got a NaNo invite I assumed was you and accepted it. :) Yeah, I suppose October will be planning month next year, haha. To be honest, I don't use all of the tools or sections on the website, but I love how you can track your progress. I wish I could use that tracker all year long, ha! :) We should definitely do it again next year! NaNoWriMo 2020!!!
| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 07 Dec 2019 5:57 pm
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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A glorious story and soooo thankful you have taken it up again. Harry and Snape's quirks about each other are fun to ponder over, and I adore the Occulmency lessons; more of them , please.
Hm, you made me laugh at Harry's determination to wrap Snape more into his life - his mood-reading works.
Eh, Sn-scrooge, your loneliness is being erased-swindled by a 'canny' teen.
Good, he needs to be needed, our Snape of the scratchy wool and lilac and herb scent.
Could you keep writing for a long time? That is my Christmas wish.
Lovely Seasons Greetings to you.
Author's Response: Haha I love the image invoked by Scroogy Snape being swindled into relinquising his loneliness by a canny teen. Made my day. :) And yes, he totally needs to be needed! Thank you so much for reading! I will be happy to fulfill your Christmas wish. :) Seasons Greetings to you as well!!
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