| Title: Chapter 35 - The Great Biscuit Plan
| 09 Jul 2020 1:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Chuckled through this chapter, which is the highest compliment from me. I love their interactions and conversation you write them both so well
| Title: Chapter 35 - The Great Biscuit Plan
| 26 Jan 2020 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: Kikimorra (Signed)
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Yay, thanks for the chapter! Harry is being quite a negotiator)) It's so much fun reading about them dance around each other)))) I'm getting the feeling Snape is gonna say yes, but the price of that will be high.... really high...
Didn't see any typos this time) And not sure there could be a *different* way to pronounce Kneader)))
Author's Response: Yay, thanks for the review! Yeah, I thought Kneader was self-explanatory, but then a was asked how to pronounce it on the other site. I know I have some younger readers and others who are still learning English, so I figured I'd clarify and the 99% who know how to pronounce it can ignore the note. :) And I guess we'll see what happens on the Potions front later. They have a few hurdles to overcome before that will come up again... ;)
I'm sorry you've been sick! I hope you're feeling better now. I wonder what else Harry was going to say to convince Snape of his plans before Kneader walked in? I could be wrong, but I feel like he was going to somehow bring up his mom, even if it was in a roundabout way. Kneader is so mysterious. I can't wait to learn more about him, especially about how Snape and him know each other. And I hope Harry's snake friend makes another appearance :) Great chapter! Thanks for being such a good writer :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not all better yet, but I'm getting there! Yes - the snake will make another appearance! I'm enjoying writing these OC's and seeing Harry interact with them. :)
I love this fic! I really like how the dynamic between Harry and Snape shifts as they get to know one another. Also I love that Snape is not done talking about the Dursleys abuse of Harry. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I love that you're enjoying the story. :)
| Title: Chapter 35 - The Great Biscuit Plan
| 25 Jan 2020 10:51 am
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| Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed)
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oo espero que te mejores pronto. Gracias por actualizar a pesar de que estabas mal@! Tuve una sonrisa durante todo el capítulo, me gustó mucho.
Author's Response: ¡Gracias! Todavía no estoy mejor, pero espero que lo sea pronto. Me alegra que te haya gustado el capítulo. :) (I hope that makes sense. I used Google Translate, ha.)
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