Ha! That was such a surprise on learning "Crabbe's" true identity I had to read the whole chapter AGAIN to see how he was treating Harry!
| Title: Chapter 39 - Window to the Soul
| 11 Feb 2021 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Amazing! This story is so good.
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
| Title: Chapter 39 - Window to the Soul
| 09 Jul 2020 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, you showed the sheer evil of Voldemort so well
I want cherry pie, haven't tried it at all but sounds delicious xD. I thought it weird crabbe was smart given his son's behavior in school.does that mean crabbe is S. Snaoe? Is he an ally? Or did something else happen. I guess I'll find out next week. I wish you have a most productive weekend and next week so we might be granted an extra long chapter xD. Just kidding! Write at your own pace and I'll be waiting for it ;)
Author's Response: Cherry pie IS delicious! Especially warm out of the oven, with a side of cold vanilla ice cream. Yummm. Yeah I decided to make Crabbe slightly smarter than his son (we all know it isn't like father like son, after all), and I figure Snape wouldn't impersonate somebody who had zero brain cells...unless he thought being underestimated would give him a leg up. In this case, I think he knows he stands a better chance of protecting Harry if he disguises himself as somebody with a certain amount of standing in Voldy's inner circle. Thank you for tuning in, regardless of chapter lengths! :)
| Title: Chapter 39 - Window to the Soul
| 29 Feb 2020 2:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Blueber (Signed)
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Wow you're such a good writer! I've been checking all week just in case you were back early. I was surprised at Harry's capture and wasn't sure how you would resolve the story with that plot twist, but I love this twist with Snape coming to the rescue as Crabbe and Harry fighting back with his mind and saying Voldy's name! I have to go back and reread when he got the ring now. Thank you for continuing to write this great story!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! It means the world to hear that you're enjoying the story so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)
I knew it! Crabbe was too careful from the beginning to be Crabbe, that so awesome! I have a feeling Lucius is on it too, given the previous chapter, with the way he was acting and Severus suddenly being able to locate Harry. Anyway, great chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, you did know it! :) Thank you so much for the review!!
| Title: Chapter 39 - Window to the Soul
| 29 Feb 2020 12:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Yeah! Crabbe did seem somewhat out of character there :DDD How did Snape manage to find Harry? So Harry can steal extra strength back through legilimency that's the trick Snape taught him. Voldemort will put Harry under the potion now, scared of Harry taking more, I'm sure. After that, he'll probably busy himself luring Snape with the ring. Maybe Snape/Dumbledore will let himself be lured while Crabbe/Snape does his mischief. Maybe polyjuice will be used, leaving Harry/death eater as potioned Harry while death eater/Harry escapes??
I love speculating about this story, I think I haven't been so strongly affected. I don't usually review so much! I'd rather not have my experience spoilt in any way so you don't have to address any of my ramblings. This has been a pleasure to read.
Author's Response: I love your theories! When do you want to start as my co-writer? ;) I won't tell you any spoilers, but I promise your questions will be answered before the story is done! I hope you're having a splendid week and can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 39 - Window to the Soul
| 29 Feb 2020 4:45 am
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| Reviewer: Xedra (Signed)
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YES!!! Oh what a great chapter! Good angst and that last bit was brilliant!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!! That last part was fun to write. :)
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