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Title: Chapter 41 - The Elusive Severus Snape 09 Jul 2020 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the description of magic awe inspiring
Title: Chapter 41 - The Elusive Severus Snape 23 Mar 2020 3:23 am
Reviewer: thegorgonexperiment (Signed) [Report This]
    Every time I read a new chapter of yours I promise myself that this will be the time I will write a good comment, one which will communicate how much I love this story and how it became some sort of ritual to check for updated every Friday and Saturday. Which is exactly why I've not left a comment right after reading the last two chapters, because apparently I'm terrible at articulation. So anyway I just want you to know that your story is lovely and I just can't wait for new chapters and it makes me *feel* things and I love your writing and I appreciate how much dedication you put into the story and everything positive thing after that. I want you to know that even if I don't say anything I'm here, reading and loving it.

    Author's Response: Aw thank you so much!! You are wonderful at articulation. :) It means so much to me to know that you are out there reading and enjoying the story! :)
Title: Chapter 41 - The Elusive Severus Snape 19 Mar 2020 7:03 am
Reviewer: AbsintheAddict (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew it! I finally predicted something in this convoluted awesome plot. I knew he would get found out when you described how magic was seen, and now the cliffhanger. Great work!. Take all the time you need! I'll be waiting for your awesome writing for as long as it takes.

    Author's Response: You knew it! :) Thanks for the review - I love that you're getting a kick out of the story! Stay safe out there!!
Title: Chapter 41 - The Elusive Severus Snape 14 Mar 2020 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Xedra (Signed) [Report This]
    This fic!!! OMG it's killing me but I loooooooove it!!!

    Author's Response: I'm sorry to be killing you but so happy you're loving it!!!! :)
Title: Chapter 41 - The Elusive Severus Snape 14 Mar 2020 3:17 pm
Reviewer: Stuff and Nonsense (Signed) [Report This]
    I was wondering how/when Snape would be "found out." Now I'm dreading what will happen to him, especially, but I know he'll have some type of plan. I do love the "seeing magic" detail; it sounds so beautiful. I hope we find out more about the ring and how it works later. I was so sure Voldemort was going to taunt Harry with the "Snape loved your mom" bit, and I'm surprised he didn't take it further. I'm really wondering just what is up with Harry's power and connection to Voldemort. I absolutely adore this story and your masterful story-telling ability. Keep up the superb work!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! (And sorry for taking so long to respond!) So here's the thing about Voldemort (at least, my Voldemort): he doesn't really understand the full range of human emotions or how valuable they can be to his enemies. I don't think he even understands that Snape loved Lily. To him, Snape had a physical desire for Harry's mum a long time back. It was fleeting and he got over it. It's barely a blip to Voldemort - a passing, amusing thought - and he has no idea what such information might meant to both our boys. So I can see him going either way - not revealing it because he doesn't think it's important, or casually revealing it without knowing what he's actually revealing. That's my take, anyway. :) Thank you for your kind words! I hope you're staying safe out there in this crazy world!
Title: Chapter 41 - The Elusive Severus Snape 14 Mar 2020 11:58 am
Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, crap! And you finish on such a cliffhanger! It has been my unfortunate observation that many writers reach a major cliffie and never update again, don't be like them! Stay focused and strong, and keep away from the blasted coronavirus [and the writer's block]! I'm anticipating a torturous forthnight - happy writing!

    How can they get away now? My guess is that Harry needs to perform some miracle.

    Author's Response: I won't be like them, I promise! Even though 12 years ago, I was just like them... But let's ignore that. I'm older, wiser, and more determined now to finish. ;) Sorry it took so long to respond to your review though! This last month has been crazy in more ways than one! Stay safe out there!!

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