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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
I love how the relationship between Harry and Snape has developed so organically, and both of them seem in character. You perfectly convey that Harry is a bit of an annoying teenager who has his heart in the right place, and Snape is rough on the outside but really cares about his charge. The character development is just so captivatingly well done. There is so much weight in everything they say and even more in everything that is not said. I am also so impressed by how you have managed to make the scope of the war feel large. Often times it seems like the Order's only job is protecting Harry, but in this fic I truly get a sense that this is a war and the Order has many parts to it. Likewise, Voldemort wants to get Harry, but he also has other goals. It makes everything feel higher stakes and more real. I am so excited to see what happens next! Personally, I am hoping that Harry uses some of those new legimancy skills to take a peek into Snape's mind and get the whole story. Then, hopefully he throws everyone for a loop when he refuses to kill him. You are a great story teller. I am so invested. I could go on about this all day. Stay safe in this crazy time! Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so so much for your review! You know, I never thought this story would be this long. Then I realized that if I wanted their relationship to feel natural as it progressed, I was going to have to drag it out and approach the progression of the plot more organically. I'm so happy to hear that you think it worked well! Also, I know in my own reading, I appreciate when you get the sense that the rest of the world doesn't revolve around the main characters. It makes things feel more real. So yay that you like that part of the plot too! :) Thank you thank you and I hope you stay safe too! The world went crazy, didn't it??
Great writing as usual, keep going and stay safe. Author's Response: I think you know Harry pretty well! Yeah, it really is different now, isn't it? Harry of even one month ago probably would have dissolved into rage. Now though... Will it be better because he knows of the letter, etc? Or will it be worse because he thought they'd built some trust between them? Only one day to find out! :D How are things in your corner of the world? My state issued a stay-at-home order earlier in the week, but I don't know how seriously people are taking it because 1) they as much as said they're not doing anything to enforce it and 2) I haven't left my house in almost 2 weeks, so I'm kind of unaware of what's going on out there. ha. It's such a weird time!!! Be well!
This, this is like being under one of Antonio Vivaldi's rainstorms. Please just get Severus and harry the hell out away. gone from that horrible man-thing. I have never had to read such a long torture of these two .. enough. Time for peace and safety. I admit everyday life is gruesome enough now in Europe with corona. All over the world. the low-key fear in isolation, my life, and the controlled panic in hospitals is just.... and it could have been spared us all, if Big Pharma didn't shut down scientists in 2004. they had the vaccine for sars.. I hate selfish greedy capitalism Couldn't you have a squadron of aurors come dashing in - like Douglas Fairbanks Jr. or Gene Kelly as the best Mousquetier. Severus needs saving. Author's Response: Aw, I know. Those poor boys have to be captives of an evil raging lunatic wizard just as the world devolves into a pandemic apocalypse. It really is poor timing. Well, their ordeal is not over yet, but we're progressing steadily toward a resolution of their current difficulties. Let's hope the real world does the same! Hang in there and stay safe in your part of the world!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! It means so much to me to hear that they are true to themselves or that you are enjoying the plot and suspense, you have no idea. It puts a huge grin on my face. :) |
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