This chapter is so great! I mean, they ALL are, but I think Snape being so mean to Harry because he "should have been his son" makes so much sense, even though Snape was so twisted to act so.
This chapter is so great! I mean, they ALL are, but I think Snape being so mean to Harry because he "should have been his son" makes so much sense, even though Snape was so twisted to act so.
| Title: Chapter 44 - A Thin Line
| 09 Jul 2020 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely lot of angst and coming together thank you
I'm sure you have enough reviews mentioning how awesome this story is.
I have to say it anyway and pay my respects.
The story is amazing. The development is well-paced, the language fabulous and the characterization realistic yet GOOD.
Now, where is chapter 45???
Author's Response: Aw thank you!! It doesn't matter how many reviews I get, one more always gives me a goofy grin and makes me so incredibly happy! :) I'm so glad you like this story!! (And chapter 45 will be up in about 5-10 minutes. I've just got to upload & format... I hope you enjoy it!)
| Title: Chapter 44 - A Thin Line
| 28 Apr 2020 4:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Ella (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating this story and just for writing it in general.
I stumbled across this and have just spent the last 3 days straight in binge reading it. It allowed me to stop thinking about the crazy world and pandemic for a while and just emerge myself in a really well written story.
Thank you so much, hope you're safe and well, looking forward to the update :)
Author's Response: You're welcome! And thank YOU for reading and reviewing! :) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you're staying safe out there as well!!
I don't know what happened but I didn't receive email about this update and so I compulsively checked my mail for a week until I accidently discovered it today while perusing the site.
This chapter is so Snape!
Author's Response: Oh no! That's not cool. I'm glad you found it anyway! And that you like it. Especially that you liked it. :)
Enjoyable chapter. It’s good to see them both open up a little.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. :)
LOVE this chapter! I've read other fics where Harry gets to know about Snape's part in his parents'death, and your take was unique and angsty in a good way and absolutely beautiful. Harry's pure nature shines all the through the chapter, and Snape being dazzled by it is just so satisfying! Thank you for this bit of perfection! SO looking forward to their escape and hopefully a closer relationship between them!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yay I'm so happy that you liked it! I really love writing Harry like this. He can still have his stupid and immature teenage moments, but he has so much purity and maturity too, and I love it when Snape gets to see them shining through. :)
| Title: Chapter 44 - A Thin Line
| 19 Apr 2020 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Xedra (Signed)
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OMG I want to HUG this chapter - and you for writing it! I love it when Harry gets to vent his feelings, he rarely gets to do that when he really needs to. The forgiveness is this feels so hard won and very genuine. My heart still hurts for them but I love how they have gotten to a place to start healing. Brava on a truly excellent chapter!
Author's Response: The chapter totally wants to hug you back! :) Thank you so much for the kind words! I had fun writing this chapter, so I'm so happy that you had fun reading it!!
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