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Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 08 Jul 2023 6:28 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    SNAAAAAAPE!!! NO, darn it!!!
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 15 Aug 2020 7:12 pm
Reviewer: adastra11 (Signed) [Report This]
    I was SO happy to discover that you've continued writing this story!!! This used to be one of my favourites on this site and I've even come back to re-read it a couple of times over the years. I love how you characterize both Harry and Snape and that you're taking your time to develop their bond. I've had the best time reading the updates since the hiatus. My favourite moments where the conversation they had when Snape discovered Harry talking to his snake friend and the emotional build up to and pay off in the scene where they finally talked about Lily. I'm also really intrigued about Harry's new abilities and where you're going with that. I really feel for Harry at the end of this chapter. Of course Snape would try to brush off everything that happened... Can't wait to find out how you're going to bring them together.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy that you're enjoying reading the updated chapters! It's been fun to work on this story again. :)
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 25 Jul 2020 3:01 pm
Reviewer: NuthatchXi (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter! Of course we know Snape's misguided internal logic, so we know he isn't being *intentionally* vicious, but unfortunately, it's an absolutely devastating choice. That poor, sweet kid. Snape is going to have to work pretty hard to undo this new damage.

    Also, I hope you're enjoying/you enjoyed your vacation! I'm absolutely dying to read more, though. Hahaha.

    Author's Response: Yes, the poor, sweet kid is right. Snape had better get his act in gear before the damage he inflicted is permanent. Thanks for the review!! :)
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 12 Jul 2020 5:58 pm
Reviewer: tricota (Signed) [Report This]
    "But Snape never came" is such a simple line for all the power and hurt it holds.
    I absolutely love how you build up this moments. Thanks for sharing your work!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 12 Jul 2020 2:10 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter, have a wonderful vacation

    Author's Response: Thank you!! 
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 30 Jun 2020 3:49 am
Reviewer: Ruthcr (Signed) [Report This]
    Didn't you get the memo? You aren't allowed to go on vacation because you need to publish more chapters! I discovered last week that you had resumed working on this story and am very happy. :)

    Author's Response: Ack, I totally missed that memo! Sorry, I'll do better about reading memos when I return. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 29 Jun 2020 3:33 pm
Reviewer: thaimes (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved this chapter. Dumbledore’s “come along, my boys” was such a nice line, and it made me giddy just reading it. I live for the Dumbledore/Snape/Harry interactions (and not least because you write them so well)!

    I also really appreciate how you’re pacing out Harry coming out of the potion and transitioning into Hogwarts. The end of the Voldemort Arc is pretty significant, and you’re doing a great job of not rushing it. Is it too cheesy to say it feels just right? 😉

    I also found it really interesting how Harry didn’t remember his time with Voldemort. It was a unique little twist that I didn’t expect, and made the last bit of this chapter all the more bittersweet :( Can’t say I’m not looking forward to Snape getting over himself and accepting his newfound role in Harry’s life.

    With that said, I hope you enjoy your vacation! These are super stressful times we’re in, and just for writing alone I’d say you deserve it. Can’t wait until you’re back!

    Author's Response:

    If it is too cheesy, then lay on the cheese, lol! Thank you so much for your kind words. I've really tried throughout this entire fic to not rush plot points, so it's nice to get that feedback when it's working. :) And I'm really not in the mood to drag things out more than they need to be, so don't worry too much about Snape staying away for long. ;) 


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