I think Harry's "vent" got cut out somehow:
'Harry didn’t realize Snape wanted a response until a few seconds of silence had passed. He chewed his lip, not sure how to respond. He settled on, “Do you want me to condemn you?”
“Yes!” ground out Snape.
The professor stayed silent, letting him vent. Harry took a deep breath, thinking if there was anything else to add, but he thought that about covered it. He felt calmer with that off his chest, and he cocked his head. “How’s that? Do you feel better now that I yelled at you?”'
Is there a paragraph missing?
Anyhoo, I've been binge-reading for hours!
Danke für dieses super tolle Kapitel
This story is *amazing*!! Thanks so much!
I was wondering, though... your story reminds me a bit of another one that I remember loving, but can't remember the name of. I was hoping you'd read it. The Snape character in that one ends up getting tortured with his mark, and Harry ends up syphoning magic from the Dark Lord in order to try and save him and get really powerful in the process. Does that happen to ring a bell, for you? I really want to find that one again!
Anyway, this is one of my favorite-ever Snape and Harry fics. Keep it coming!!
| Title: Chapter 52 - Like a Dad
| 26 Sep 2020 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter. Thank goodness Severus has come to his senses and is helping Harry
Hi, wonderful that you're back from holiday [I know I've been a bad reviewer lately, but I've been reading].
So, I'm very disappointed with the adults in the story, especially Dumbledore, McGonagall and Pomfrey who failed completely. Snape, well, I would rant at him a lot more than Harry did. Addiction ugh the poor kid! I'm imagining an awful time ahead for Harry.
| Title: Chapter 52 - Like a Dad
| 23 Sep 2020 4:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Xedra (Signed)
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OMG them yelling at each other to clear the air is just the best thing ever!!! XD
Loved this chapter, finally Snape is back and committed to helping Harry. Loved the fluff. Thanks for another great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 52 - Like a Dad
| 22 Sep 2020 8:47 am
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| Reviewer: Handa (Signed)
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I’m in love with this story!! Thanks so much for updating :)
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