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Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 09 Dec 2019 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I love how Harry is manipulating Petunia

    Author's Response: He really could have done well in Slytherin, huh? ;)
Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 28 Jul 2008 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, (as always!) though I have a little trouble imagining our noble Harry leaving even 'Ole Snapey in pain. I hate Aunt Petunia.
Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 15 Jan 2008 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Um, no Proffesor this is not the prison tower, this is my bedroom....chirp..chirp...

    Your way is better. Lol :)
    I am rereading the whole story. I have read it on fanfiction net and here but I like reading it here better because I can make the text bigger.

    I really like the scene were Harry is eating those canned peaches, Sluurrp! Lol

    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Yum...I'm getting a craving right now for canned peaches myself! LOL!
Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 06 Sep 2007 4:26 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    GAH.

    "The sun was hot, but the cool breeze more than made up for it. Harry was flat on his back on the green grass, basking in that glorious breeze, and in that moment he couldn’t bring himself to care how mad Aunt Petunia would be over how few weeds he’d managed to pull this morning."

    Has anyone ever told you how perfect that paragraph is? It's like ... awesome XD

    I love love LOVE Harry's reaction to Snape. A lot of times I read how Snape is injured and Harry immediately steps up to clean the wounds ... but DUDE, if I had a half-dead man on my floor, I would NOT be touching him straigh away. I'd be like ... erm, NO. My hands are clean (and you are not). So thank you for finally writing a realistic reaction to a gross, injured man XD

    Snapey Snapey Snapey - you're very passive aggressive aren't you? You know, I think we need to work on your communication skills. That, and personal hygene XD

    Author's Response: This is so fun - like hearing your reactions as you're reviewing! :)  And yes, that would be my reaction, too - blood, dirt, grease, eww! You want me to touch WHAT? I'm glad we can both relate to Harry's dilema. ;)
Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 07 May 2007 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry sure does have it rough, but I think he might have hurt Snape when he kicked him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I sure hope they both make it out in one piece. I'm glad Snape has you to feel sympathy for him, with Harry not on his side. It probably did hurt, especially considering he's still recovering from other injuries...

Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 05 May 2007 7:15 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wonderful! I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response:

    Please do!!! :)

Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 05 May 2007 2:16 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story! Hope you can update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the 'awesome' - Words like that put a smile on my face. :)
Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 04 May 2007 7:02 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this chapter a lot. You have set things up beautifully for Snape to learn just exactly how Harry is treated at home--which is one of the main things I've always wanted Snape in canon to figure out. Harry's efforts to clean up Snape were believable--not too bumbling, but he's never shown any abilities with healing before either.

    The actual writing of this story flows well, and I noticed no errors. That is a wonderful gift to this terribly picky reader. I should also note since you are a new writer that I am a fairly hard grader--a story has to be really exceptional to get more than an eight from me and I'm more than willing to give less! :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you sooo much for the nice review. I hope you like the rest of the story... And I will have to make it my personal mission in life to get more than an eight from you. :) This is going to be fun...

Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 04 May 2007 7:42 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter! Petunia got easily sidetracked but will Vernon? I imagine Harry will be in a bit of trouble for not finishing his chores. This is excellent so far and I cant wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Yes, they're both quite a piece of work, aren't they? But Harry's pretty smart...if he can get past Voldemort more than a couple times, I think he's up to the challenge these annoying muggles present, don't you? But if you're not so sure, keep reading and find out!
Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 04 May 2007 7:11 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice job! Good second chapter, I just wish that there were more! Good of Harry to try and take care of Snape. It's no surprise the rubbing alcohol woke him up! Ouch! Nice plot device, it seems logical. Harry was rather start to get Petunia worried about magic. Iwonder how this summer will go. :) Thanks for posting!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the reviews, Jan AQ! I appreciate hearing what you think about the story. :)


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