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Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 11 Feb 2021 6:22 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHH!! This is so good. This is the second time (at least!) that I've read this fic and I just love how you portray Snape, especially in this moment of realization. So so good!!
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 11 Dec 2019 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter I could feel the claustrophobic atmosphere of the room, thank you

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :) I enjoyed writing that chapter.
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 12 Oct 2019 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 06 Sep 2007 4:58 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Harry was bored. He was totally, utterly, completely bored. Altogether, entirely, perfectly, thoroughly bored. Fully, wholly, exhaustively… He was running out of words to describe how bored he was, but at least the thinking of those words had taken a few more minutes out of his boring afternoon."

    I just want you to know that that is absolutely perfect because usually reading about a boring situation is as boring as being in said boring situation. But you have made it very funny and un-boring XD

    Vernon Dursley: you still haven't overcome Petunia in my list of evul!characters in Harry Potter, because I suspect she is rather smarter than you and her damage to Harry has been more emotional, rather than physical. You can't fault a stupid man for being stupid, after all - unless you are Severus Snape of course, who doesn't suffer fools and, let me tell you, Vernon, you are practically the definition of stupid. I bet they have your mugshot right next to it, in fact XD

    Snapey: You are slowly gaining points with me. Firstly, you weren't overly cruel or sadistic - though I guess some people think that the truth is cruel. Secondly, you have started up an exchange of information with Harry, which is one step in the long, winding road towards SNAPE/HARRY LUFF (or, you know, tolerance, whatever XD) and world peace XD

    Author's Response:

    I agree with you completely on the Vernon vs. Petunia debate!  I think Vernon is the more volatile and damaging in certain ways, definitely, but Petunia is worse in my mind because I really do think she's a little more intelligent and has more sense of what she actually is doing to Harry.  Right on!

Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 06 Jun 2007 9:54 pm
Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love cliffhangers!!.....Well only if I find out what happens next really soon ! LOL LOL thanks for the chapter!!
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 16 May 2007 3:50 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter...I loved Harry's attitude towards Snape. I can't wait for an update! Great job so far!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The words "great job" are always lovely to hear!
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 15 May 2007 3:44 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    And here I hoped one would have a chapter 6... Ah well...

    Update soon please!

    Author's Response:

    I know, I'm bummed too that I can't write faster. If only writers could write as fast a readers read - I would love that world! Except there would be an awful lot on my reading to do list...

Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 15 May 2007 1:01 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story! Hope you can update soon!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I hope I can update soon too!

Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 15 May 2007 12:16 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! Haha Snape was sooo wrong about Harry's life and it was practically proven to him. Keep up the excellent writing and I really look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks. Snape totally needs a wake up call re: Harry, don't you think?
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 14 May 2007 7:25 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape was very well done in this. I liked Harry's feeling that Snape was working on a puzzle. That is very Snape. I think Vernon was also in character in this. For some reason, he is deferring to Petunia on Harry, but I can see him finally losing it. However, I think Harry has some form of protection that keeps Vernon from physically striking him in canon. I remember the time Vernon grabbed him in OotP and got a shock or something. But I can see how for the purposes of this story, Harry probably needed a little bruising. I am eagerly awaiting updates on this story.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the insight - that's very interesting! And I'm glad that you otherwise think the characterization is working. Thanks for reviewing again!

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