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Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 12 Oct 2019 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good juxtaposition between the happiness at the beginning of the chapter and the end thank you

    Author's Response: Ooh I love it when people use big words to describe my writing. It makes me feel like an honest-to-goodness writer. ;)
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 31 Jan 2008 12:46 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is great but something has just occured to me, how are harry and snape relieving themselves if they are locked in a room
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 06 Sep 2007 5:33 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Snape tapped his foot, the motion comical in his socks and too-short pants."

    Ok, that's hilarious because that is the exact same pose my mum adopts when she is pissed at me XD

    Snape: Any points you gained for making me laugh at your expense were hastily removed for being an insensitive git. Sorry.

    On another note, I'm glad we finally sorted out that whole snitch-dream thing XD Plus: Hogsmeade gets pwned? Ah, poor Harry, just what he needs - another weight added to his shoulders and strange dreams with a Doppelganger who can see the future. Well, at least they're not of Voldemort XD

    Author's Response:

    Tell your mom to act like Snape when she's upset, and I bet you'll be running for your life soon...

    No need to apologize to Snape. He doesn't care anyway. But let's put him in an enclosed space with Harry for about a month and see if THAT makes any difference... ;)

Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 01 Jun 2007 3:47 am
Reviewer: sarafyna (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! Just stumbled across it and I'm already addicted. I really like the interaction between Harry and Snape :D

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you stumbled upon it! Please keep reading!

Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 30 May 2007 10:22 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I wasn't expecting anything like that to develop in this story. Excellent writing. You aren't taking the relationship with Snape too quickly, but we are seeing movement. And then the dream--and another prophecy. That's another big, intriguing plot twist. When I started reading this story, I thought it was just going to be a nice, enjoyable Snape-and-Harry-learn-to-get-along-after-being-locked-up-together story. I can see now that this is going to be a whole lot more.

    Author's Response:

    Yes! This story is about Snape & Harry, but it's about them within the context of the war. I'm going for actual plot. Hang on, it's building! Yay! I knew this story would be seen as another "Snape & Harry I-hate-you-oh-wait-I-love-you" fic. I'm sure people will still think of it that way for a while, but I'm hoping to win them over as the story continues. :)

    P.S. I hope you still see it as nice & enjoyable.

Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 30 May 2007 6:00 am
Reviewer: cootiepatootie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so interesting. I stumbled upon it on the recommendation of this site from a friend and by reading the "what's new" section. I look forward to the continuance of this story. I especially look forward to the content of Snapie-poo's letter to Dumbledore.

    ta,

    Cassie

    Author's Response: Hehe, I was just picturing them calling each other Snapie-poo & Dumble-doo. Better not let Snape catch you talking like that! hehe :)
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 3:14 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Eek! Awesome chapter!!

    Author's Response: Eek! You talk like me!
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 1:02 pm
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMGushies the suspense! Cant wait to read more :D

    Author's Response: Can't wait to hear your comments as you read more! Really, I wish I could write as fast as people read!
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 8:49 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic Chapter! I loved Snape in this chapter, it would be just like him to poke his abnormally large nose into Harry's business and ask about the presents. And so ungrateful with demanding Harry's food. lol. Loved it. Well anyway, I can't wait for an update. Great job again.

    Author's Response: Totally Snape. I hadn't planned on him stealing Harry's food, actually... He just kinda took over and did it. Very rude on his part, but I found it entertaining, albeit at Harry's expense.
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 8:46 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Surreal dream scene. It's nightmarish.

    Earlier, I really enjoyed Harry's birthday scene. The watch was touching. Fantastic job.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!!!


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