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Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 22 Jan 2020 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the scene in the potion lab, very funny thank you

    Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was funny. :)
Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 18 Dec 2019 5:00 pm
Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed) [Report This]
    estos dos son super cabezotas jaja

    Author's Response: Lol! Hopefully they'll get over themselves long enough to learn how to get along. ;)
Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 09 Sep 2007 4:10 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    ‘sessions of consequences for daring to be alive.’

    LOL. I am totally going to call detentions that from now on. Well, except for the fact that you don't get detentions when you're at uni ... but we'll think of something XD

    Plus, this was the best line, in my opinion:

    "Well, no other wizard, that is…but thinking of Dobby’s methods of helping him wasn’t really much comfort."

    So I was reading what other people have written in their reviews, and I just realised that I am majorly not serious. Seriously XD

    Author's Response:

    Seriousness is highly overrated. Seriously. :P

    I love to hear people's favorite lines. It makes me happy!

Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 07 Aug 2007 12:29 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was totally like Snape! Trust Snape to make Harry forget about the dream he had by making him disembowel toads. Aww..maybe Snape really does care for Harry! I'm just kidding. It's probably waaay to early in the story for something like that to happen yet! However, I thought it was nice (again, gasp!) that instead of just telling Harry to go to bed, he gave him something to do to take his mind off of things. The scene with Dobby was perfect! Ha ha! Harry should know better by now that it is never a good idea to offer Dobby a chair, or the opportunity to sit down (Chamber of Secrets!). I wonder if Snape will eventually begin to tutor Harry in Potions or something. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Thanks for making my day a little more interesting with your wonderful story!

    Author's Response: Better not tell Snape you think he's a nice guy...he might make YOU disembowel toads! :)  Thanks for another wonderful review!
Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 31 Jul 2007 11:28 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah Finally got the Seventh book and read it now I am free to read ALL the stories and review. Did not get spoiled with it.

    AS to the story LOVE IT. Look forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    hehe, I felt the same way!  Now I'm not worried to go online or open the newspaper for fear of accidentally seeing spoilers!  (I was even scared to open some of my reviews for a while, scared that someone might let something slip...) 

    Thank you for reviewing! I hope you continue to read and love it!

Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 31 Jul 2007 5:40 am
Reviewer: belle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hehe...smelly dead toads...i swear, my eyes just about popped out of their sockets when i read the title of this chapter! 'tis marvelous!!! *shakes author's hand enthusiastically*

    anyways, i have lately been having this tendency to feel really guilty every time i read a "please, review," so here i am, reviewing. not a very common sort of thing for me, but seeing as i just devoured twelve chapters from you, i *do* owe you something! :-)

    hmmm...shan't spoil book seven for any prowling eyes, but I LOVED BOOK SEVEN TOO!!!!!!!! YAY!!!! i went prancing about the house and remain on my "book seven high" even now. in other words, i get all giddy and start babbling wildly when i hear any words related to harry potter, magic, or books. *nods*

    now i get to bother you with my favorite quotes from this chappie! yay!

    hehe...i love how dobby got to compose an "ode to Harry Potter." brilliant way to put it, and oh-so true!

    i guess i just have a strange sense of humor, but i couldn't stop laughing at the "Harry knew he wasn’t going to win. So he glared and picked up his next toad."

    so blunt! and out of context, i can picture some poor person just browsing around looking for a good story and stumbling on that line without reading anything that preceded it...

    ha, and snape's wise observation that disemboweling toads is easier when fully awake...

    don't you just love that guy?! and of course, naturally, we all love you, the marvelous author...*shameless flattery* thank you bunches for this wonderful story!

    whee!!! i send you virtual chocolate bars and oranges! (i like oranges. oohhh...and tangerines, too. and i wish i've tasted a tangelo, but i can't say i have. have you? are they any good?)

    Author's Response:

    Reviews like this one make me want to get out of my seat and do a little dance...even if I'm at work.  Seriously.  I can't even tell you how wide I grinned at the length of your review - THANK YOU!

    I'm so glad you liked the chapter title and liked the story enough to have 'favorite quotes'!  Hehe, you should write more reviews - you're good at it! :)

    Oh, and I don't mind shameless flattery.  I welcome it with open arms.  And no, I can't say as I have tried a tangelo, but it sounds quite good.  You'll let me know when/if you try one, won't you?  In the meantime, I'll satisfy myself with those yummy chocolate bars (milk chocolate, please) and oranges...yum!!!

Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 31 Jul 2007 3:22 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Alright, so I just read all 12 chapters in one sitting and am in love with your story. You're an excellent writer, and I think you've characterized Snape and harry perfectly. Well done! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: It is so fun to hear someone tell me that they not only discovered and liked my story, but read it straight through!  Thank you for making my day!  I hope you continue to follow the story!
Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 30 Jul 2007 11:17 pm
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, he got caught eavesdropping...

    But yes he should say thank to snape for taking him away from the Dursley's.

    Well, can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response: All that eavesdropping, he was bound to get caught sooner or later, huh?  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 30 Jul 2007 7:38 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh sometimes I just wanna smack Snape! Poor Harry must be going crazy with boredom and then has to slice up froggies in the middle of the night, sitting near Snape, to relieve it. Yuck!
    At least they both lived through it. But what's this about Lucius? I can't wait to find out that secret.

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, it would be fun to write a good Snape-smacking into the story...hmm... :)  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 30 Jul 2007 6:13 pm
Reviewer: bluebird88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love Harry's slow realizations about Snape - the fact that he owes him a lot, and that even when he's furious with him he's not about to deny him meals. I think it's very consistent with Harry's character that even though he does realize that Snape's done a lot for him, he still can't bring himself to thank the man. He does have his pride, after all.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Yes, Harry does have his pride, doesn't he? I'm glad you think it's consistent with his character!

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