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Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 23 Jan 2020 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely fuzzy chapter. I loved Hermione stressing about which books to buy.

    Author's Response: She does love to stress about her books, doesn't she? ;) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 28 Mar 2014 2:29 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I an continuing to thoroughly enjoy this story.
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 18 Sep 2007 12:38 am
Reviewer: em_conway4hp@yahoo.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story.....please upsate soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I've been tending to update about once a week, usually Sunday night. No promises, of course, only tendencies... :)
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 09 Sep 2007 4:16 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Azkaban Prison is expected to reopen by the end of the year, under improved management and with vastly superior security measures."

    Ah, propaganda. Gotta love it XD

    I bet in a year's time when it opens Voldemort will be all like SURPRISE, SUCKERS! and in control.

    “Yeah, but who’s gonna protect him from Sna – ow!” Ron rubbed his sore arm, eyes shooting daggers at Hermione."

    I love Ron. He's always the best. Plus a lot of people seem to think he's only there for comic relief and that at the first sight of trouble he turns on Harry, but I'm glad to see he's getting his place as Harry's BFF (LOL I can't believe I just used 'bff' ... someone shoot me XD).

    Author's Response: I love Ron, too! Sure, he's impulsive & such, but he's not Harry's best friend for nothing!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 13 Aug 2007 3:34 am
Reviewer: Banner (Signed) [Report This]
    This is terrific - I'm completely absorbed. I love this view of Snape. He's an intelligent, complex man.

    Author's Response:

    That's what I like about canon Snape - as horrible as he is to everyone around him, he is so incredibly intelligent.  I'm glad I was able to preserve some of that in my story.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 09 Aug 2007 12:40 am
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story! Waiting for Harry and Severus bonding!!

    Author's Response: I just hope they don't do serious damage to each other first...I'd hate to see the bonding take place in the hospital wing, wouldn't you?  Well, on second thought, Madam Pomfrey could probably do a sufficient job of restraining them...  Anyway, this was my long way of saying thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 08 Aug 2007 1:44 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    "“Ronald! We’ve more important matters to discuss!” Hermione turned from her scolding to wave a folded piece of parchment in breathless excitement. “Your O.W.L. results have arrived!”"

    Perfect Hermione voice. And now that Harry is cheered up a little, maybe he and Snape can approach a little better understanding.

    Author's Response: Hehe, thank you. I love Hermione - I've been looking forward to writing her (and hoping I could pull it off). I'm glad you liked it - Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 08 Aug 2007 12:19 am
Reviewer: belle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hehe...the belle is continuing her little reviewing mission! besides, she is shamelessly addicted to her review responses. *nods* they make her feel very happy.

    ooo...pufferfish anatomy! must be fascinating to study that firsthand, huh Harry?!

    i swear, i love reading some of the stuff snape comes up with! it's brilliant!

    i thought the whole ministry cover-up of azkaban was very realistic for canon-iness...i can just imagine them scurrying about in their little offices and weaving up a little story to publish!

    ha, and yes, i caught that, "yes, ron, you can have my broomstick if...you know..."

    trust our favorite wheezy to be the epitome of tact!

    the part where snape stopped before saying spoiled was kinda sweet, actually.

    ugh, sweet isn't the right word!

    well i don't know, but it made my heart get all swelly and look proudly at snape and harry and want to give them a gold medal for achievements of mankind.

    there, my descriptions of emotion have improved dramatically, haven't they?

    Author's Response:

    It's the belle! Yay! I'm glad I get to be a little part of making you happy, as you are a huge part of making me happy!

    Let me just say: I'm glad I've never met a pufferfish. I think Snape is a brilliant guy (and I'm glad - I'd never be able to write him if he didn't tell me what he wants to say). That ministry - sheesh - will they ever grow up? And I love Ron's lack of tact, don't you? :)

    Yes, your descriptions of emotion are excellent - I actually swelled a little right alongside you at hearing it put like that.  Though I wouldn't tell Snape he's "sweet" quite yet.  He might have you for dinner.

Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 9:51 am
Reviewer: Branwyn (Signed) [Report This]
    :-) Updates from you never fail to make my day better. Your Snape is made of awesomesauce.

    Author's Response: Yummy!  You actually make him sound edibly delicious. ;)  Thank you for the nice review!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 6:19 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm glad Harry got to see his friends in person rather than always owling them. Is Snape going to make him cut up potions ingredients for the rest of the summer or something?

    Author's Response: If Snape had his way (and if it were legal), I think instead of having Harry cut up potions ingredients all summer, he might use Harry as a main ingredient.  But that's just my impression... ;)  Maybe he'll come around...or maybe not...  Keep posted!  And thanks for the review!

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