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Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 4:04 am
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yea! Another brilliant chapter!! More soon PLEASE!!

    Author's Response: Wow, how can I resist a please like that? ;)  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 12:34 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent! Excellent! I've finally caught up with my reading! Terrific chapter! So much happened! I thought that Harry's interaction between Ron and Hermione was spot on! I'm really happy that Harry told them about the prophecy! Now that Harry hasn't got all of the O.W.L's that he needs in order to continue on, I wonder what he is going to do. Perhaps Snape will ask Harry what he got on his O.W.Ls or Harry will ask Snape for some leeway. Well anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens next! I really hope that you will update very soon.

    Author's Response:

    Oh no...I'm so sad that you're caught up.  I was having a lot of fun reading your reviews. :(  I guess I'll just have to get moving on finishing the next chapter so I can read more!!!

Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 06 Aug 2007 8:31 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Hope there can be some action in the next! Please update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'll see what I can do about some more action in future chapters...  :)
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 06 Aug 2007 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Man, Snape is ruthless...lol. Although, to be honest, I wouldn't expect him to be any other way. I like how you've kept Snape in character. Sometimes I read fics where Snape is way too coddling, way too soon, and it makes me a bit ill, really.

    Plus, I think you've made it clear that Harry really doesn't like people feeling sorry for him or treating him like a child, and Snape doesn't do either. I'm anxious, though, to see how Snape and Harry get along for the rest of the summer. It seems like Snape really understands Harry even if he's reluctant to admit it.

    I'm enjoying this story so much! You have a real talent for writing realistic dialogue. The exchange between Hermione, Ron, and Harry was spot-on. I loved it.

    Oh, and I really liked how you ended this chapter. It's nice to see Harry smile once and a while...he's such an angsty kid. lol.

    And one more thing...since I read this story straight through a week or two ago, I meant to comment about the early chapters, but forgot when I kind of lumped my review into one at the end of the last chapter. ANYWAY...I appreciate how you made the abuse Harry suffered from his uncle believable and not over-done. I've read fics where Harry is absolutely pummled by Uncle Vernon and left for death. I guess I'm just saying that this fic is awfully believable and I love it!!


    That said, I can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, I totally know what you mean with getting ill!  I think it's the amount of fics I've read that have annoyed me with a too-nice-too-fast-Snape that made me want to take his development so slow in my own fic...

    Thanks so much for the complimentary review! I love to read what you & others like (or don't) about this fic!  I'm so glad you're liking my writing style and that you think it realistic!  Thanks!!!

Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 06 Aug 2007 8:26 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved that Harry got to have some time with Ron to grouse about the Greasy Git. hehee, that was very satisfying, I'm sure. And the love from everyone who came to the order meeting made me feel great, too.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I think Harry was getting a bit lonely without his friends... Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 06 Aug 2007 8:12 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    YESSS! Another chapter. Great as always. Sorry NOT to wordy just great great great.

    Author's Response: Not wordy is fine, as long as there are enough words to let me know you liked it! :)  Thanks for reviewing!

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