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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
Author's Response: Wow, how can I resist a please like that? ;) Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Oh no...I'm so sad that you're caught up. I was having a lot of fun reading your reviews. :( I guess I'll just have to get moving on finishing the next chapter so I can read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll see what I can do about some more action in future chapters... :)
Plus, I think you've made it clear that Harry really doesn't like people feeling sorry for him or treating him like a child, and Snape doesn't do either. I'm anxious, though, to see how Snape and Harry get along for the rest of the summer. It seems like Snape really understands Harry even if he's reluctant to admit it. I'm enjoying this story so much! You have a real talent for writing realistic dialogue. The exchange between Hermione, Ron, and Harry was spot-on. I loved it. Oh, and I really liked how you ended this chapter. It's nice to see Harry smile once and a while...he's such an angsty kid. lol. And one more thing...since I read this story straight through a week or two ago, I meant to comment about the early chapters, but forgot when I kind of lumped my review into one at the end of the last chapter. ANYWAY...I appreciate how you made the abuse Harry suffered from his uncle believable and not over-done. I've read fics where Harry is absolutely pummled by Uncle Vernon and left for death. I guess I'm just saying that this fic is awfully believable and I love it!! That said, I can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: Hehe, I totally know what you mean with getting ill! I think it's the amount of fics I've read that have annoyed me with a too-nice-too-fast-Snape that made me want to take his development so slow in my own fic... Thanks so much for the complimentary review! I love to read what you & others like (or don't) about this fic! I'm so glad you're liking my writing style and that you think it realistic! Thanks!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Harry was getting a bit lonely without his friends... Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Not wordy is fine, as long as there are enough words to let me know you liked it! :) Thanks for reviewing! |
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