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Title: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted 13 Aug 2007 4:23 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...what an awesome chapter!!! Your characterization of Snape is so perfect. Of course the only time he'd ever call Harry by his first name is when he's basically incoherent. lol. I really liked the dream sequence though. The descriptions of the cold basement made me feel like I was suffocating. Also, I think it was brilliant of you to show Snape's sympathetic and concerned side emerge when Harry was sobbing (because let's face it...the boy never cries). It seemed like it really freaked Snape out to see him in such a state.

    But that said, I really think the brilliancy of this story lies within your ability to keep Snape in character. I'm just really, really loving this story!

    Author's Response:

    Perfect? *blush* Can't get a much better compliment than that! :)  I love that you love my Snape - he really is fun to write, so I always cross my fingers that he's fun to read as well.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted 13 Aug 2007 8:39 am
Reviewer: Solitare (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story, I look forward to more ^^ skittles to you

    Author's Response: Wow - I ask for chocolate and I get skittles! I love it - what else ya got? ;)
Title: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted 13 Aug 2007 7:35 am
Reviewer: belle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    well, when you put your plea for a review like that...how can i resist? here you go...your virtual milk chocolate wrapped review, courtesy of -the- belle...

    hmmm...i have apparently gained a penchant to identify myself by a definite article. how odd.

    anywho, lovely chapter! i will, as always, proceed by going through and listing all of my favorite snape moments...whee!

    mind you, i just realized that would be rather impossible, seeing as i would end up quoting the "snape presence" verbatim. and i'd imagine you would not turn to reviews to go through that...you'd merely scour the story. hmph. life isn't fair...*pouts*

    i also just realized that your snape is rubbing off of me, i think...i'm a bit more sarcastic then usual! all good though...sarcasm is fun! squee!

    and i can still go through other stuff i adore about this, so no worries there...for one, snape! and then, there is, er...you know..snape. and then, of course, there's our favorite potions master! oh, and did i mention...

    eurgh. not going anywhere...must focus...

    oy, i really want to force harry to have an all out talk with snape about his dreams! and then they can have a whole bonding moment, in which case i can coo happily from my little reader's corner until my virtual snape kicks me out and makes me disembowel dead smelly toads for an equally smelly potion.

    delightful, isn't it?!

    yes, i agree all the way, harry. the earth must be knocked straight out of its revolution before snape dearest would ever lose his insulting talents! poor you, getting all traumatized when he failed to deliver...

    Author's Response:

    THE belle - as you will forevermore be known to me - thank you once more for such a long review. :)

    Glad to hear you liked the 'presence Snape'! Life isn't fair - you liked so much of it that I didn't get to read it in your review. Hmph. Well, my first impulse was to write so few enjoyable lines next time that you wouldn't have a hard time deciding which to put in your review, but I think that may be a bad idea. So instead, I'll just thank you for the compliment. ;)

    Oh, but don't overuse the sarcasm bit. It's fun, but remember - no one particularly likes Snape in his world. (Well, not yet...) ;)  Although I can tell that in our world, THE belle is a definite fan.

    Yeah, I want to force Harry to have an all out talk with Snape too, but he won't even listen to his own fanfic writer! So stubborn, those two!

Title: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted 13 Aug 2007 6:52 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was an excellent long chapter. The dream sequence in the beginning was weird since he couldn't wake up but atleast Snape helped him out. Keep up the great writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried about the dream sequence being too confusing. Still worried, actually, but moving on to the next chapter, which is a lot more straightforward... ;) Thanks for the review.

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