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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
Author's Response: Thank you!! Harry and Snape are so fun to write together. :)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you're loving it! It's fun to see your comments as you make your way through...even if my language skills are lacking and must rely on Google Translate, lol!
"The security code you entered did not match. Please try again." I get this message every single time I try to review. It always takes at least two or three tries for me to submit a review and every time the code is correct. Dad burn it!!
That whole bit is the best bit in this chapter, just because Harry is being pig-headed and an idiot and is using more upper-case letters when he speaks than I do in my reviews XD Snapey - I'm too lazy to evaluate your performance in this chapter and convert that into points because I am very tired. Though I will give you points for being part of Harry's vision and saying you'd rather eat mouldy cabbage and beetle stew. I'll leave off reviewing chapter 17 until tomorrow when I have had a decent injection of caffeine, otherwise you'll be subject to a review that practically defines cruel and unusual punishment XD Author's Response: Yes, Harry needs to learn to control those upper case letters sometimes, tsk tsk. Caffeine...you, Sweartoad, are a reviewer after my own heart. ;)
I can't blame Harry a bit for being so upset at the idea of Dumbledore sending him back to the Dursleys, especially now that he knows how truly bad it is. Even in canon, I always felt Dumbledore (much as I love him) should have done more to protect Harry. Harry might have had to have lived at Privet Drive (though I think he'd have been safe at Hogwarts under Dumbledore's protection, too), but certainly Dumbledore could have insisted that the Dursleys treat Harry better. Ah, well, sorry to get off the point. Back to your wonderful story. I have a feeling thought, that Snape will have a say in it too. Either flatly refusing to allow Harry to go back or volunteering to go with him. Now that would be interesting to see--one glower from Snape and the Dursleys would probably be waiting on Harry. And Harry really is seeing the future, hmm? That could be scary, considering what all he's seen. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am so happy that you like my characterizations - it puts smiles on my face! :) hehe, I like the thought of Snape glowering the Dursleys into submission, especially once they truly know what devious deeds that man is capable of committing...hehe. Stay tuned! I'm done with the next chapter - just need to revise it. It should be up tonight (9/3). I look forward to hearing what you think!
Author's Response: Definitely planning to continue it. :) I can't update every day, but I promise I'll finish the fic. I only hope you all enjoy reading it half as much as I enjoy writing it!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am thrilled to be on your favorites list, and I'll do my best to live up to the responsibility! ;)
My heart is about to burst through my chest, I have goose bumps and uhh *shivers* That was a very intense chapter and I'm sitting on the end of my seat! Please you have to update very very soon!! Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you for the enthusiastic review! Even though I am sorry to hear that I've put you through some turture with the cliffhanger, I am thrilled to know that you liked it enough to be on the edge of your seat!
Harry is actually seeing the future? Omg, can't wait to see what happens... Please, update soon! Author's Response: Yesss, a cliffhanger! Now I can thoroughly torture all of my readers... *cackle, cackle* ...oh, no! They can hear me! Ahhh! Thank you for the review! Please keep reading!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad to hear you liked the way it played out. Please keep reading - I enjoy reading your reviews! :) |
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