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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
Author's Response: Thank you!
Love that. Thrilled to see a new chapter. Your slow progression of the changes in Harry and Snape's relationship is believable and stays nicely in character. Well done. Author's Response: Thank you! I had the whole chapter written, then added that last line on a whim. :) I'm glad you liked it!
AWESOME. Although I admit that they don't trust each other, I think that maybe Snape is in the best position out of all the adults Harry knows because firstly, Harry knows (or thinks XD) that Snape doesn't give a damn about him, and is probably a little bit more open around him than anyone else. Purely because there aren't really any consequences to telling someone who hates you that you have bad dreams, or whatever, and also because that person is less inclined to act anything other than professional (or, you know, a step down from professional, whatever you call that) towards you, so there isn't any weird emotional baggage. Um, yeah. The point of that was that I luff XD Seriously. ALSO I really like how Harry is like this perfect mix of bad communication, stubborness, dry humour and general teenage-ness. "And there had better not be any singing." Le sigh. So perfect XD I love it when Harry still comes across as funny and like a normal teenager. I can't tell you how many stories I've read where it's been like, My name is Harry Potter. I live on the planet ANGST, in the town of ANGSTville, and I go to ANGSTwarts school of ANGSTardry and ANGSTcraft. Oh yeah. I'm totally ANGSTY and not fun :C Also your Snapey ... so perfect. I luff XD If I didn't think he'd totally hex me into next week I'd give him a big fat hug. You get a million points, Snapey, because Kirby Lane has written you awesomely. And you are totally made of something more awesome than awesome (actually, that applies to both of you - Snapey and Kirby Lane XD) XD Author's Response: I agree with your analysis of Snape's ability to be what Harry needs. Well thought out! I laughed when I read your ANGSTastic summary of those ANGST-overload stories! ;) (Not to bash them - I admire every writer who takes the time to put their stories into words. It's the only way one can learn to grow as a writer, after all.) I do try to put some lightness into my story, because not only does it make it fun to write, but I don't want to ever delve so far into angst, despair, what have you, that humor can never be found again. After all, the world may not be easy all the time, but it certainly doesn't have to always be taken drastically serious, either. :) And thank you for the awesome awesomeness radiating from you! |
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