| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 01 Feb 2020 11:23 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good conversation between them. I love how their relationship is building, very realistic
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 19 Dec 2019 3:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed)
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oh bien. vuelven a ser unos completos cabezotas jaja
Author's Response: Haha they'll get better, but they still will always be them. ;)
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 25 Sep 2019 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woah. Awesome chapter. Your Snape is spot on. Fantastic. Harry is so in character too. I loved the chat they had, so compelling and dramatic. Well done. I just LOVE reading your Snape. Harry thoughts are very interesting too. Great descriptions, pace, development of drama and plot. Well done chapter.
Author's Response: I'm trying really, really hard to draw a balance between a Snape who doesn't like to let on what he's thinking/feeling and a story that can only progress by him showing something of what he's thinking/feeling. It's a balancing act, and I'm just happy that the result is being enjoyed. :)
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 09 Jul 2017 12:05 pm
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| Reviewer: FirefLili (Signed)
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY
(if it wasn't clear, I LOVE it :D )
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 07 Feb 2016 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Love it! Any Chance for more?
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 30 Nov 2015 4:46 am
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| Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed)
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This story is such a unique take on the mentoring relationship. Also they are both very much in character. My favorite part is when snape and Harry answer each other's questions. :)
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 14 Jun 2015 11:40 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Totally engrossing. Witty and unique even within the subgenre of Harry&Snape here at Potions and Snitches. Thanks so much for sharing.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 02 Apr 2015 5:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Suze (Anonymous)
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I am sorry this story has been abandoned. I love the depth of the characterization. *sigh*
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 25 Sep 2014 8:37 am
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| Reviewer: Steph. (Anonymous)
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AAAAAAAAAAA!
Hm. Yes. So, hi, how are you, I'm fine. I see you have a note on your author page from 2013 that says you're not done with this story. I see that it's late 2014 now. I don't like the odds. But you have written one helluva story here, whether it ever gets done or not.
I just wish I didn't have a preference, either way. But I doooooooooo. Ain't that just a wrench. You mentioned that reviews help you to write--which is the only reason I'm reviewing a story from friggin' 2008. Look: I'm not really even into fandoms that much, living under a rock as I do, but even *I* have been through, like, four fandoms since 2008. And that's just fandoms, let's not mention life itself. But maybe it's time for you to get back to your roots?
Anyway, about this story. It's well-written. Well-plotted. Suspenseful. And usually in stories like this, Dumbledore is evil, eee-vil like the fru-eets of the deveel, but you've managed to write Dumbledore...similar to the books. He's flawed, but still honestly means well.
And Harry is...age-appropriate. I mean, he's not acting too young or too old, which is another trap in stories like this. He's believably a 16-year-old kid, trying to figure out his way.
AND SNAPE GIVES NOTHING AWAY. I loveses him.
And the plot. And the way you've set up these visions. Like, I totally believe you have the rest of this story planned out, because it's been so careful. And I have a weakness in my heart for careful fanfic.
And, anyway. I know my chances here. 2008, man. 2008. (sigh)
So. Congrats on what you have, here. Six years later, it's still pretty good. Yup.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 31 Mar 2014 9:45 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am glad I read even though this seems to be it. I imagine that the last vision is the one that came true... and they all lived happily ever after. :) thank you for sharing.
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