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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
P.S. Are you interested in RPing? If so, there is this site I go to and I think you'd make a wonderful Harry. Maybe Dumbledore? Just let me know and we can discuss it ^_^
Death by suspense. Whoever thought it couldn't happen was wrong, my dead body will be proof of it. I'll leave something for you in my will. Ok, enough with the weirdness, (grin) I loved this chapter! I squeled when I heard that you had updated. There might be a few people a few miles away who didn't here me. Lol. :) I loved how you explained Harry's fear and how Snape responded. Cool Snape, calm Snape. Hehe! Or calm most of the time his scream fest was very fun to read about. When tempers rise the readers will cheer! The Chapter end notes and when Harry was thinking to himself in this chapter had a lot of (if's) in it. I think I understood how Harry must have been feeling. Nothing is clear, anything can happen, may the force be with you. Lol, I really hope you will write a sequel after this one. Thank you for updating! I love it when I have new material to read. A new chapter from this story is better then chocalate! Well now you know what happens when I review late at night when I should be (yawn!) sleeping. I hope I didn't ramble to much, thanks for responding to my last review. Only a few authors do that and I really like to hear responses. Great chapter and great story. :) You make my life complete! :) Scorpia
I love how things depend not only on Harry trusting Snape, but on Snape trusting Harry. Snape has some real doubts about the plan and maybe, once he sees a seemingly invincible Voldemort, he will decide to stay on the winning side and leave Harry in the basement... (ok, I'm betting that you won't give us such a horribly bleak ending, but maybe it's something that Harry will come to fear?) Seriously, I'm getting chills just thinking of what that poor kid is going to be facing. And Snape too... having to play the part of nasty death eater to the point where he might have to torture Harry... *shudder* Because Snape has already done things in this story that demonstrate care for Harry (not that he'll admit it), things that go beyond immediately preserving Harry's life. And now to have to torture the child... You've set up such an absorbing, painful and thorny situation for them both, and I can foresee a series of chapters that end on gut-wrenching cliffhangers. I liked their conversation at the end there, and I also want to know all the reasons Snape was so hell-bent on hating Harry. But right now, at this point, he didn't say, "Potter, I hate you." He said, "Potter, I don't like you." (which from Snape is practically a declaration of love). So he doesn't hate Harry anymore, though Harry probably doesn't get that yet - and Snape probably doesn't realize it either. They're both so dense about these things. And Harry's worst fear is so real and wrenching. I wish Snape would just give him a hug already. But I like how you're pacing their relationship. Your story is seriously one of the best out there, and I hope you update soon!
“Once. I sneered; you cried. It was very satisfying.” **I laughed outloud. I shouted for joy when I saw you had updated and received strange looks. But honestly, the fact that you updated just made my entire weekend. So thank you. Harry was perfect in this chapter--his uncertainty, the way he kept awkwardly smoothing down his fringe, his outbursts. I love how you've characterized him. Your Snape is quite witty, which makes me adore him. You've added dry humor to this story, which I completely love. I marvel at your ability to keep Snape in character for so long. Makes me want to throw my story onto the floor and smash it with my shoe. I wonder if their mentor-ish relationship will develop any further--they aren't close by any means but it's strangely satisfying to read. The dialogue---oh, yes the dialogue--is stunning. And it's so realistic with all of Harry's 'ums' and 'ers'... And now, I'm nervous. The thought of Harry locked away in a dark basement is quite terrifying. But I can't wait to see what you do with this story. You know how to keep your audience in healthy suspense ;) This was brilliant, as always. And long (thank you!) Write soon!
Great chapter! Can't decided if I love the cliffy or hate it. Oh well, update soon. Did I mention this was an amazing chapter? Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I certainly hope it's love, not hate... ;) |
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