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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
Title: Chapter 27 - Occlumency, Part 1 07 Jul 2020 8:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very perceptive account of Occlumency thank you
Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 07 Jul 2020 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I hope Remus and Harry continue to have a good relationship in the story
Title: Chapter 25 - The Gift 07 Jul 2020 7:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the conversation about books that Harry started, hilarious! I wish he asked him if he liked Jane Austin, that would be brilliant! Thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 30 Jun 2020 3:49 am
Reviewer: Ruthcr (Signed) [Report This]
    Didn't you get the memo? You aren't allowed to go on vacation because you need to publish more chapters! I discovered last week that you had resumed working on this story and am very happy. :)

    Author's Response: Ack, I totally missed that memo! Sorry, I'll do better about reading memos when I return. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer 29 Jun 2020 3:33 pm
Reviewer: thaimes (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved this chapter. Dumbledore’s “come along, my boys” was such a nice line, and it made me giddy just reading it. I live for the Dumbledore/Snape/Harry interactions (and not least because you write them so well)!

    I also really appreciate how you’re pacing out Harry coming out of the potion and transitioning into Hogwarts. The end of the Voldemort Arc is pretty significant, and you’re doing a great job of not rushing it. Is it too cheesy to say it feels just right? 😉

    I also found it really interesting how Harry didn’t remember his time with Voldemort. It was a unique little twist that I didn’t expect, and made the last bit of this chapter all the more bittersweet :( Can’t say I’m not looking forward to Snape getting over himself and accepting his newfound role in Harry’s life.

    With that said, I hope you enjoy your vacation! These are super stressful times we’re in, and just for writing alone I’d say you deserve it. Can’t wait until you’re back!

    Author's Response:

    If it is too cheesy, then lay on the cheese, lol! Thank you so much for your kind words. I've really tried throughout this entire fic to not rush plot points, so it's nice to get that feedback when it's working. :) And I'm really not in the mood to drag things out more than they need to be, so don't worry too much about Snape staying away for long. ;) 

Title: Chapter 22 - Harry Potter's Heart 28 Jun 2020 8:03 pm
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed) [Report This]
    How do I get access to your marvel fic

    Author's Response: Alas, I haven't posted it yet! I stopped working on it in order to finish OME (I'm a one project at a time girl), but I plan to get back to it after OME is complete. :)
Title: Chapter 48 - Muggle Healing Magic 27 Jun 2020 6:08 am
Reviewer: thaimes (Signed) [Report This]
    I re-read this entire story about twice every week between updates. I can't wait for the next one! The plot is really interesting and engaging– I can't get enough of Snape and Harry's interactions. I have to say I look forward to seeing how they'll fare in school. Wonder if Dumbledore will be proud of the bond they formed when they were imprisoned together? I strangely picture a meeting in Dumbledore's office between the three of them where Harry just makes a sarcastic remark or something to Snape, and Dumbledore just stands back, shook at how the world literally ended because he could *swear* that was almost a smirk in Severus's face. Whatever comes though, I'm sure it'll be good. Can't wait for more of the boys! Stay safe during this pandemic!

    Author's Response: Wow, I'm so excited that you love it that much! It means a lot when people care enough to re-read OME before it's even complete, because I've done that myself with my favorite WIP fics. :) Thank you for the review and you stay safe also!!
Title: Chapter 24 - The Mental Arts 24 Jun 2020 1:58 am
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm rereading this for the thousanth time because I wanted to remember the progression of their relationship with all the new chapters lol. And now that I have with the new info I have noticed a lot of for shadowing that I never noticed before. i am curious if this was for shadowing on purpose:

    He was even pleasantly surprised to find that it wasn’t all drudgery. Once he got past the dull introductory chapters, there were quite a few fascinating facts about Occlumency and tactics an Occlumens could use. It wasn’t all about fending off attacks, he learned; it was also about mastering misdirection. When he got to the chapter about ways in which strong emotion could be tethered to specific memories, which could then be used to misdirect a Legilimens, he read the chapter twice through and marked it for future study.

    I just ask cause that's kind of what barru did with Voldemort. He used the emotion of love and those memories which really fucked with Voldemort s head. Idk if that was done on purpose. I already think your fucking brilliant and if it was done on purpose than that just shows even more brilliance than I realized lol but if not: don't worry. You're still brilliant

    Author's Response: Thanks so so much for the review! I love it when people pull out things that I put in the story, not sure if anybody would ever notice. :) Honestly, I do put seemingly inconsequential things in that I plan on being important later, but sometimes I also get inspired by past chapters to expound on things that weren't necessarily planned. This one was about half and half. I knew that I wanted Harry to use that bit of Occlumency and that it would tie into his battle with Voldemort, but I wasn't 100% certain yet exactly how it would play out. :)
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 20 Jun 2020 4:54 am
Reviewer: Mischief_Managed4431 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sigh* I love this!

    Author's Response: *sigh* I love reviews. Thank you :)
Title: Chapter 48 - Muggle Healing Magic 19 Jun 2020 12:17 pm
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    Adorable Harry. But probably hard on Snape to hear a lot of that.

    Author's Response: Yeah, true. Snape needs a hug, maybe? :)

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